Reviews for You Are A Prom Queen
LucyCullen123 chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
AW! That was SO cute, it's unbelievable! :)
ballofire27 chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Wow. It's not often I find a writer that writes so simply beautiful. You had great grammar, and it was emotional. 100% of the things I have to say are positive. Well done.
TeenageVampyre chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Awwww .
seddieroxxmysoxx chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Oh my god! How do you do it? I have read all three of your iCarly one-shots and I loved them, I fell in love with them! I love your writing style, keep going, write all the seddie stories in the world and I will make sure to read each and every one of them:)
xGoldxRosex chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
OMG this is amazing! Seddie! And it was really well written(:
Butterfree chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Wow, I have to say that the best part of this story that made it stand out from most...was probably Carly's sub-plotline. You made it seem so insignificant and for laughs in the beginning, only to have it be the deciding factor in the end. It's just..wow.

And instead of just having a love theme, you had this theme of dancing and proms, which I can imagine Sam being afraid of. You had an awesome way of having Freddie help her overcome that fear in your alternate universe where they aren't always fighting. The way you interlaced your plot lines, themes, and genres, were all nicely done.

Thanks a lot for the read and good luck with any future writting!

~ TwisterKirby
badserenity chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
I loved it! It was so sweet and nice! Not cheezy seddie like other stories are(:
the fish is now dead chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
So here is my review of "You are a Prom Queen".

First of all, I would just like to congratulate the writer on some superb writing. The writing captured my attention, was descriptive, and flowed well. It was intriguing and just well done. It was very real, it was relatable to the teenage audience. Fantastic. Your spelling and conventions wre also good. I didn't spot any mistakes, but that might have been because I was really into the writing.

Secondly, let's talk about the story. I liked the plot, the prom idea, Sam's hate for her dress and shoes and bra. It was definitely good. I would have liked to see more developed relationships, both with Sam/Freddie and Carly/Sam. Maybe you could have given a little more history on the characters, or more dialogue between the characters that silently explains who they are, if you know where I'm coming from (confusing, I know). For example, did Sam like Freddie? Did they have any relationship in the past? Other than that, the Carly plot was really awesome! I laughed.

They were some true shining mments I enjoyed as well in the story, like Sam's little epiphany at the end, and also the Sam/Freddie dance. I liked that moment, they seemed really close. So thank you!Overall, if I were to rate the story in stars, I would give it about a 4.3/5 (yay for decimals!). Great job!
PinkFanF chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Cute story :) loved it
poopforbrains chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Ahh. That's true, Rachim. I am sorry for that but the point of this story is how Sam is afraid of quite about anything and instead of being abusive, like the show, she instead shuts everyone out by being an "abyss of negativity". :)) And how our favorite dork wants to help her. Thanks for your opinion though. I did try my best to keep them in character as much as I could. It was just too hard. :)) Ahh. I'll try better next time.
rachim4 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Sam is VERY OUT OF CHARACTER! I do like it though. but Carly and Sam are so OOC its hard to read