Nice
Is this the ending? I like the mix of Christian and fey.

I like the crossover of christianity andfae more's. The beginning is intriguing but I want to know how money will be dealt with. Also, does Karen ever come out of her coma? Plus, why are the banshee's attacking? What Does reaching Sarah look like? So many questions. Toby is a compelling character.

I loved the story. Absorbing, entertaining and chock full of majic. Thanks.

PLEASE FINISH! I LOVE THIS STORY!

Hello, I have just devoured this story in one sitting. I had seen that it wasn't marked complete, and that it hadn't been updated in over a year, and I started reading anyway (sometimes I am a sucker for punishment)
So, let me just say...
...Please finish this!...soon?...Please?

Drat.. had hoped this would be completed but its been over a year since the last update.. Please return and post the finish... :)

I've read several of your stories, and I loved them all but this one, I think, is the best, hands down. Just the right balance between light-heartedness and seriousness, the Toby-Jareth relationship is very lovely, and this Jareth is probably the closest to the film version. Love it, and please continue! Best wishes to you, dear author.

Yay! I’m sooooo beyond happy you are back writing. I reread the whole story again, just to refresh my memory. I love your work so much. I also want to take the time to admire your own personal strength in going through incredible medical trials and life changing events the last several years. I truly hope things are going well for you now!

Oh god, please please please update this story. Such wonderful writing and such a heartfelt story. I am going to be sitting up a night wondering what will happen in this story. PLEASE UPDATE!

this chapter is absolute genius, thank you for sharing it!

Raphaela is too cool, and she so gets the best last line.

having to start over at thew begining b/c its been sooo long since I read this... I couldnt guess at what chapter I left off at...

ooooh but no worrys... love to reread your writing

Sorry I didn't review earlier. The chap was in my inbox for a while but life was... We'll life. It's a good chapter, Jareth has been long overdue for some introspection. That last line though, now that's super ominous!

Just found this fic this week and have been thoroughly enjoying it! I love the premise of Toby wishing for help and Jareth being their savior. You do an amazing job of writing Jareth- he is lovable and relate-able, yet still a bad-ass Goblin King- a perfect blend of gentleman. Looking forward to checking out your other stories now!

omg- I love it!

I'm so glad that you wrote another chapter I still want to see what happens next