Ahh love it to much please please update

I love how you gave the information of the girls in an orderly fashion!

Poof? don't tell me water reverses...what ever is on them. makes sense if you consider cats don't really like water.
your presentation of connecting the story to your readers could use a touch up, and a little more detail and you need to work on your points of view, I had to read parts twice to figure out who was with who and who was doing the narrative at times.
Please update, and good luck on your writing skills.
(yes I tip when I review, Strider does the same thing so why should I make better writers out of you?)

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Ewwww, marysues again...

This is a great story! Please try to update as soon as you can!

DAMM THE SUSPENSE! I CAN'T WAIT!

Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh! Cliff hanger nnoooooooooooooo! *mentally praying to see Itachi naked*

I tried picturing that. I kept meowing...

It's good enough for me! Good night!

12:36AM. Don't want to stop reading but tired as fuck... I'll go to bed after the next one due to I'll be busy trying to guess their names al night and sleep in until noon again.

I'm sorry, my OCD has caused me to skip down to the review box for a moment. Please don't hate me. Her name is KoNan not Kohan. It's an N, not an H. Again, OCD, sorry, going back to reading now.
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To answer you question, alternate between short and long ones. Long ones as a treat to all the good readers that review on every chapter. And stay up past 12:04 AM just to read... Okay one more chapter then I'm going to bed.

You'd think I'd be tired of ready stories about the Akatsuki in this world as kittens, but nope! It spikes my interest every time.

pls more chapters!

Hmm... it seems like Katelyn is just like Hidan... Just try to put capital letters for the first names, because you wrote 'savannah' instead of 'Savannah' Just sayin' Is the OC thing still open? I have a good bitchy OC...