I LOVE THIS FANFIC. This is really good :) I thought was so funny was when in the first chapter when Sasuke was like "first you kick my ass, then you fuck my ass and now you want to cuddle." I couldnt stop laughing I love this fanfic :)

can you write a kakairu?

omfg love it!
I prefer SasuNaru though x

"Naruto continued to thrust faster, and fast moaning Sasuke's name, and pumping Sasuke's cock faster." - You've got three variations on the word "fast" in one sentence. That's too much.

Besides that little technical bit, I kind of like it. Naruto's really violent! The plot seems a little rushed but, not bad.

Awwwwwwwwwww! luvs it!

i like it, short and sweet, lol i luv the how u portrayed the characters. Yea a multi chapter would be good, i dunno, good work luv'd it :3

I really liked this fanfic

I love bad naruto and still want sasuke to himself

and I love NaruSasu so much

PLZ, continued

I feel like this could have been a really good story, but there were just a few things that I didn't like:

First off, I didn't understand why if Naruto is in love with Sasuke he'd beat him up so badly - there's loosing your temper but to that extent is a little extreme...

Also I don't understand why Sasuke would act like nothing happened after the attack - one would think that he'd just stop talking to Naruto all together after an attack like that because that isn't something you should do to someone you love or to your best friend

Naruto attacking him just seemed so random - I know Sasuke was acting like a jerk but you don't just attack someone that you love because of something like a bad attitude - I get the whole he was being more of a bad boy kind of thing but Sasuke said girl so unless Naruto sees him as a girl there was no reason for him to act like that because he never indicated that it was the way to win his heart

Then I would just think that Sasuke would be angrier after finding out that Naruto violated him like that...

The whole reason for them fighting seemed weird to me for some reason - I've read stories where Sasuke gets mad because he's jealous but never to the extent that it'd make Naruto beat the crap out of him - especially not when Naruto already knows that he has feelings for Sasuke

And the last thing that I didn't really like was how the story made Sasuke seem very weak - I love when Naruto is dominate, but I see them more as equals when it comes to physical fighting

I'm not trying to be mean, I just think that the premise was good but the story line could have been better

Credit to this story goes to Nina Asukina, a friend who asked me to post this, because she uses her page for Rated T fics, and not Rated M. :D she likes to be a good teenager, who writes out good adult themed stories.

Heres her link check her u/1511532/Nina_Asukina

So far she has some good stories, and a few beginner like stories, but she is good, she wrote this one I posted, so yeah