I don't usually comment on stories but this is amazing, the pacing, the visuals you can picture it all

okay believe it or not... I read the line about Quinn seeing the time as 10:42 at night AND LOOKED AT THE TIME ON MY PHONE AND IT WAS 10:41 and it clicked over to 10:42 like as I looked at it... the coincidence :ooo... anyway I stopped reading just to write this comment so now I’m gonna read the rest of the chapter. loving the fic so far! :)

I've read this story before way back when. I've always remembered it because it left such an impression on me, with how you write about quinns and rachels feelings in such depth. And music is such a huge part of this fic and that makes me swoon even harder, especially the headcanon that quinn is a secret musical genius. I don't think I finished the story tho, I stopped reading right when faberry went on their first date. Life got in the way. But I'm determined to read this all the way through now because my Christmas break is coming up and I'm so excited to read it! Defintiely one of my top favorite faberry stories :)

Sometimes a car is just a car and a piano is just a piano. I’m not even entirely sure how you came up with “metal transporter” in replace of car or automobile or vehicle or sedan or SUV or compact car or the model of the car or literally anything else. Also, I like your story.

Just came across this gem. I legit had tears in many scenes throughout. So, so good.

amd these 3 just keep on dragging themselves to their early grave.

Omg! That was beautiful. I loved every second. Thank you!

Very good story!

I love it!

I love this story. When you get towards the end of the story you forget what happens at the beginning. That's what happened with me. I forgot what happened before they got together and when they first started dating and that's because you're writing is so good and is quite realistic. It's like reading a novel and you have done a brilliant.

I know that i complained a lot during this story but that's because something mistaken no matter how big or small can make a huge impact and that's what happened here. You got the timing of college application way too late; you got the the college years wrong, instead of three or four you put two; and then the academy award, you put the date as 2013 and you kind of forgotten the time jump. All that brought the story down and it is hard not to forget. But nevertheless, a great story

Okay so I know that I have been complaining a lot, but it's only because that you're story is so good, but a lot of the timing is wrong. "It's 2013 and it's the academy award". They graduated in 2012 and three years of college and then they meet 5 years after college and a year has gone by. It should be 2021... You're sticking to the same year and forgetting that there is a time jump

Okay I have been trying so hard, but this keeps pissing me off. It's been about a month and half since prom and prom happens in May. They should've had nationals and graduated by now. And also, career day, that happens before Christmas as that's when you apply for colleges. Applying at the end of the year doesn't give the enough time to process it and do the finance and stuff

So I just found this story and I am loving it. Usually I stay away from angsty stories but this is just really good. I just wanted to point out that in the previous chapters that you stated that Rachel's birthday was after the holidays; it did say in the show that her birthday is on the 18th December. Also allying for colleges happen in October. November and not after the holidays.

This is the faberry story I have been searching for and have wanted so badly. It has high school and college and a happy ending. The way you wrote this fic is simply amazing. I cried so much regarding the forebears and how it will mean so much to them. I love how you write Quinn I love how you write Rachel and how relationships make such a big impact. This is honestly one of the best fics I have ever read so thank you

SPOILER ALERT!**THIS. This is good! I love the plotline. I love the writing style. I love the characters. I am a stoic reader and I rarely get bothered by what happens in a story but YOU dear author, has thrown me in for quite a feels trip and I LIKE THAT. Everything, from the facepalming moments of Finnept, to the silent cheering for Faberry, to the breakup... honestly I thought I was going to die because it felt like you stabbed me in the heart and then TWISTED THE KNIFE. I kid you not, I felt pain in my heart for the suffering couple... and might have cried on the inside. BUT I think this story is one of the best that I have read and I have read a lot. the portrayal of the characters was on point, Quinn's seemingly misguided yet self sacrificing ways and Rachel's naivety and want for love was captured beautifully by your story. I applaud you as a writer