I loved this please make a chapter 3

Please update.

I need more... Please... So good... *collapses & dies*

I love this story you did a great job

WRITEMOREYOUSONOFABITCH! please?

Are you going to continue the story? I love the extra part you put at the end.

This is quite an interesting take on their relationship! Looking forward to more from you.

*nosebleed* Oh, wow... Th-This is so... *dies from blood loss* x/x

This was written really well and I was really engaged the entire time! I hope you write more on this! Look forward to the possible next update!

Wow. This is really really GOOD. I hope you write more...I'm not good at writing reviews. Anyway I love this please write more. :)

Oh yay! You updated! :D i am glad. Also, very well written continuation. Its sad and you keep the fear in Alfred which is good because i hate it when some people write about rape like its nothing. Like "la dee da i just got raped" -_- however you write the effect well. Good job, also the conflict within Alfred is pretty interesting too. Please update soon.

This is a great idea going your own way. I want to see how you will do this. I know it is shota, but I want to see them happy together!

That...was so sad. I love it. Good job writing this, now I have to go check out this comic.

WOW! Thank you for writing a fanfiction of my comic! The reason I made a comic instead of a fanfic in the first place was because I can't write worth beans so it's really neat being able to see this story written out. I'm very pleased with how you wrote it. You basically have everything the same as in my comic, you didn't add any inner monolouge that wasn't there or discribe any deatails that weren't in the comic. Thank you for being so repectful I really appreciate it. I am so flattered, this makes me very happy :)

If you want to continue with the fic and add your own spin on it you are welcome to. I would be interested in seeing your own take on the situation.

good story your a good writer. I felt sorry for America. I hope you write more

anyway, I am curious about the comic you were talking about. I've spent the last hour trying to figure out how to find it. I'm so confused. Can you send me a link to it please

Thanks