I love this fanfic!

Noooo don't fight!

Poor Sasuke:(

I really like this so far

Nice

My feelings are convoluted right now. There's the relief an euphoria that Naruto and Sasuke, at the end, understand each other and are making progress to a better future, but also the pain that there's no more story to read. I don't mean that the story ended abruptlyㅡquite the opposite, I am very satisfied with the ending you wroteㅡbut still I always wish to see Sasuke and Naruto the happiest they can be, in writing, so I can read it instead of assume it. I'm going to miss your writing. It was so consistently good the whole way through the story. I've finished now with heaviness in my heart that's going to be there for a while. It was the kind of story that stays after the final period.

I am not a person who has a lot of tact. I can't take hints or read between lines, so what I say has to be taken with a dose of scepticism: I couldn't work out what position Naruto and Sasuke were in in the last sex scene. I got that Naruto was doing Sasuke from behind but the changes in their position through the scene were lost on me. Sasuke was upright, and then he had his face pressed into the sheets? But I didn't dwell on it too much and just made something up myself. I'm sure other people got it. I don't know why I can understand this kind of stuff.

As always, you write with only the best of words. I jolted down this line: "His voice begins to crack, makes a strained cry he drags his teeth against his bottom lip to stop." The imagery in my hear was so clear. Just amazing storytelling.

I love the way Naruto and Sasuke progress without there being any enjoyment for the Reader. I want them to be stupidly in love because that's what I always want, and when they're not, there's an ache in my heart. You're writing makes me feel.

I fell asleep after reading chapter four and when I went to review it after I woke up, I somehow accidentally left the review on chapter five. This is the proper hapter five review. The last one was for chapter four.

I was caught off guard by Sasuke's kiss, which is just what I like, because it meant I had to think back and reinterpret all of Sasuke's actions until then. Of course this is a sasunaru story so I could assume a lot of Sasuke's feelings, but you write his closed-off exterior so well that I didn't see it coming at that exact moment.

Another thing: your description. It's the perfect amount, written in the perfect way, describing only the necessary things. Your knowledge of gardening and fighting makes the detail that much more engaging. I can see everything in my head clearly.

The pace, and the way you show Naruto and Sasuke's friendship(?) improving(?) is really interesting. I put those question marks because it's hard to describe precisely what they are and if it's going in a good direction or just staying still. It's slow, which is fun to read, because the changes are so subtle.

Your characterisation of Naruto and Sasuke is the best. I"m not sure what it is. Maybe it's because they spend time together and on the outside they look and do things that friends do, but at the same time there's history that prevents them from being friendly. Friends, but not friendly. It makes for the best kind of tension.

I know this story has an end, but at chapter two I'm already sure I don't want it to.

"an unravelled smile"

I liked that. Your writing is really pretty to read.

Oh wow i love this! Please make a sequel!

all that drama for nothing seriously though