Brava on this brilliantly done story, which captures Charles and Erik both so well. I love the tenderness and care-taking in it, and how Erik gets Charles to relax at the end by sharing one of his own rare happy memories with him is such an unexpected, powerful move. Wonderful work - I'm sharing this at my forum. :)

Great fic!

Keep going! Keep going! Keep going!

I despise how Erik the supposed champion of mutants shuns Charles' powers - which I understand but really, Erik. Anyways, I really like the end. Charles was adorable and Erik was...Erik.

Awwwww...that's very sweet! I enjoyed that!

Awww that was so sweet :D

One word- BEAUTIFUL!

Wonderful job! That last scene was so touching.

Wow. It's a very realistic take on the characters! I'm impressed. In so many fics where Charles is injured/ill, Erik acts like a doting mother hen. But your interpretation is, I feel, much closer to the truth xP

Thanks for the great read!

Love it. More please!

Awesome. I loved every bit of this! I really enjoyed how you had Erik spot on. Thanks for sharing this :)

Fantastic job on this story! I love your characterizations, they really fall in line with the ones from the movie. Excellent writing style too, descriptive but not overwhelming. Great job!

Okay, that ending? Perfect! I just love how Erik basically sang him to sleep (in a round-about way)...you are a genius! :-D

Xx

Excellent story, I loved the friendship between Charles and Erik. It was well written.

very nice story~