This is tooo cuteee!

I like itt, you made it full of action. it was a pleasure to read it.

oh, how intriguing. this story is very interesting. keep it up. and post more soon.

I love it! please update soon

First of all I'd like to say happy birthday! Yay! Okay, so your fanfiction, it's awesome. I like how you even gave Cobbs kids a part in it, nicely done :D. So I hope you update soon because I'll be waiting!

First of all, Happy Birthday!(Even though it's a day too late...). Second of all, I really liked this chapter! I'm happy to see that they now have a clue as to where Ariadne is. Let the action begin! I hope you update soon!

First off HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

And second of all, great chapter to read.

It sounds like Arthur is taking Ariadne's disappearance badly.

Can't wait to find out, what happens next. Until then.

Aww, poor Arthur! Great chapter!

HAPPPPPY BIRTHDAYYYYYYY! hehe, here's you're present! Please update soon, and have an awesome day!

Oh poor Arthur he is really taking this hard. Great chapter. Hope you update soon.

Great chapter to read.

Arthur is obviously worried about Ariadne. But she better keep the faith that someone will be looking for her.

Again, looking forward to more. Until then.

My only disappointmet is that I have to wait for more :P As usually I'm completely awed by how amazing your writing is. To answer your question I'd personally be ok with ok with either. I can wait patiently. Er. I'm not being much help am I? Sorry. I've always been rather indecisive. -;;

Anyway as the author I feel it's really up to you. You could post unbetaed and fix it later. You could also find a temporary beta, as I'm sure many people would be willing to help. Or if you really want to you could wait. Ah! I know I didn't help at all, don't shoot me. I'll just be in favor of whatever your final decision is...sound ok to you?

I was right. This is an amazing story. With just two chapters you have me completely addicted. I'm honestly suprised this fic hasn't gotten more recognition. I'll be sure tell quite a few friends of mine. I'm honestly speechless. In a good way of course :)

This is without a doubt in my mind ones of those fics that from the second you start it, the first few sentences, you know it will be amazing. You have an excellent start and I'm thrilled to get to the other chapters. I have no complaints or critisms. This is flawless and I'm already hooked.

Definitely unbeta'ed chapters. I need this story like Arthur needs to find Ariadne. ;)

Seriously though, this story is wonderful. It's written really well, and I love it!

unbeta'd chapters. great chapters, really getting arthur's emotion.