Nice chapter glad Galatea and Flora relationship is blooming. Clare calling Teresa and Irene mom and mother would make me really happy.

When Irene said, " That would require thought" I was dying this was the best line in the chapter. I'm glad to see a slight improvement in Galatea and Teresa relationship. Oh man Galatea knows everything you can't just have a late night make out session without her knowing lol. That was so funny when Galatea just raised her eyebrow when Teresa and Irene got back to camp and when she told them the others went on a 'walk' as well. Be careful Teresa you never know when Clare is listening. I'll be looking forward to the talk with Clare. Man Galatea was having a field day at Teresa expense. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

" Insecurities leads to the death of a relationship." I hope Teresa get her insecurities and jealousy under control. I miss Galatea. :(:::

Mhmmmmm...that all I have to say for this chapter and that Galatea need to learn more control over her power about shifting out emotions. I hope she learned that control. And Galatea you completely midread the signals.

I thought Galatea was going to smooch Irene that would have been a hell of a battle Teresa vs Galatea. Galatea and Teresa are similar so they butt head more often, I'm glad Irene there to calm both of them down. However, their arguments are funny. Man Galatea be on a roll with insulting people. Looking forward where the story goes.

You brought out Rafaela I didn't think she would get involved. I love the little reunion between Teresa and Rafaela and Irene and Galatea and Tera. I don't blame Rafaela for saying fuck this I'm going to find my sister.

I knew that fight in the town was going to attract Riful attention. I hope Irene don't freeze in battle.

I glad they made up. I don't blame Irene for worrying Riful is defiantly someone you want to stay away from. She likes to play games and as they said she is unpredictable, who knows she might go after Clare. The Creatures of the Abyss is nothing to played with.

Wow we got alot of tea this chapter. I guess we now know how the organization found out. That number 16 shouldn't have taken her flirting so serious, however I'm going to give the side eye to Teresa for not being honest about what happened. But at the same time I do understand why she didn't tell Irene.

This is such a interesting story. Teresa set herself up for that comeback. In a battle of wits Irene wins! :) Looking forward to where the story goes.

Hi, this is probably my 8th or so reread of this fic. I'm trying to make a habit of commenting on fics I love more, and made and account so I could review.
This fic shaped a huge part of what inspired my own writing and characterization for Claymore fanfic. You capture Irene and Teresa and all the characters so well that I swear I can hear them. The way you write is so beautiful and expressive. I love that they aren't a picture 'perfect' couple. Theres so much I wish I knew how to word but I want to avoid being flowery and weird.
Thank you for inspiring me to begin writing my own fics. This fic helped me see the potential in the Claymore universe and made me fall in deeper obsession(in a good way) with it.

Wonderful story - thank you so much for sharing it!

VERAMENTE FANTASTICO, INCREDIBILE ,STUPEFACENTE ,UNICO E RARO . MI HAI FATTO COMMUOVERE RIDERE TREMARE DELL' EMOZIONE , TI HO AMATO SUL SERIO.

Fantastic, you've written a new manga, you've done your characters, assuming inspiration, and sharing the characters that created the manga writer, I was surprised that you created another alternative reality of Claymore, another reality happier, you've been able to follow the line of manga time; the only thing I'm sorry about is that you did not meet Claire and Raki,
even so it was pretty good, even though I would have liked the behavior of human Claire with the Human Raki ...

WRAPPED thought I had made a claymore to Claire, but you survived me if you managed to keep it human despite the risks that ran ...
I love you, I admire you for writing this masterpiece

im crying, that was the best claymore fanfic ive ever read. seriously, im not even gonna bother reading any more fics, cuz none could possibly top that one. kinda bittersweet at the end, but i hope everyone stays in touch. these characters felt so real to me and really touched my heart. thank you for such a lovely, emotional, gripping story. your writing truly is wonderful!

beautiful chapter. beautiful ending. teresas scars will make her look even mor sbadass. i love how ilena realized that home is where the heart is. beautiful

it was nice to see things from teresas pov!