I can't help but wonder what your take on the world's longest handrail would have been if you had finished this. D

Oh my God, that scene with Fettel and when he tries to sound Shakespearean and shit- PRICELESS! xD

Funny how Douglas mentions Bettlejuice and how Jin continues to be weird. I thought it was funny how Point Man was playing basket ball with a Replicas head. I hope you can update this, but I know how your busy with The FEAR Tracker. But still I enjoy this short story. It is always good to laugh every now and then.

Oh man, I really love this update!

You weren't kidding when you said Jin is really unhinged. She's got that whole 'mad scientist' streak to her, but a lot creepier.

And ouch: "Shit, I thought FEAR only hired you to fill the ethnic quota."

Now we know why Jin doesn't seem to do much technical officer stuff in the first FEAR. :P

Also love the addition of Fettel here and just how off his rocker he is. I thought it was funny when he started mumbling Shakespeare lines and they just turn to leave him behind.

Again, great job on this chapter!

THAT...Was mother F-ing funny! Please make another chapter, or at least...no just post another chapter if possible, because that was kinda humorous. I liked it. It truly was hysterical. I always did wonder why it was no body complained about P-Man being silent, or wonder how it was that Paxton was able to come back to life through the Extraction Point storyline. I thought it was pretty well done, and I think you did a well job at that.

Ow. I guess being shot in the groin sill hurts when you're dead. Haha.

This is really good so far. The story is really fun and well done.

Please continue.

Awesum! Are cha gonna kill Jin and Dough like in da original storyline? Dude, it SUCKED when they killed em, I rly liked em. D