I loved this story! I couldn’t bare to read the alternate ending! Excited to go and read the sequel instead of sleeping now

Fierce esme is the best. First Fic I’ve ever read that shows it and I *love* it.

Omg. So many tears

This has been a fantastic read! I didn't really get any work done today because I was stuck reading this story :D oops. Seriously though, this was really great, especially because I love Jasper so much and there were so manx heartwarming moments. Thank you for uploading this story!

I'd sorry, but when Edward realizes that something is new with Rose, all I could think of was a blind Ban Solo muttering, " I'm out of it for a little while and everyone gets delusions of grandeur! ".

This has got to be one of the MOST creative and inventive plots I have ever come across! Well done indeed! Thanks for letting Esme be the Hero here: Don't NOBODY mess with Mama Bear's cubs!

Why aren't Jasper and Rosalie telling the others about the Morse code?

Are you serious right now? You're going to try and shovel me that shit? "You're mistaken, Jasper" "I know you think you did..." Why didn't Alice back him up? She would've seen the proof. Seen Jasper's decisions to ask Bella these questions. She would have seen them clearly because she was already focused on the two of them to begin with. But of course not. Give me a fucking break. That was the most nonsensical bullshit I think I have ever read.

You can’t possibly know how rare it is for me to cry like a little bit#h over a story no matter how emotionally charged they are but this one, the ending STILL has be bawling like my two year old who just lost his blankie! Can’t wait to read the sequel. I’m imagining Irina is gonna go to the Volturi and it’s gonna be a big problem. I’m looking forward to it!

Wow, I’ve read A LOT of stories and this has become one of my favorites! I just added it to the home screen of my phone as an icon so I can always find this one quickly! I can’t wait to see where this goes. I hope she kicks Edwards a$$ and I hope that Bella’s and Jasper’s new friendship continues when she is hopefully turned. They always seemed to be the perfect candidates for a romance or as best friends so if I can’t read them as a couple, I’m (almost) equally happy to read about them as best friends or even a really close brother and sister relationship. Thanks for sharing this!

I much prefer the first ending, because I am an HEA-lovin' person. This one was sad. (Even tho they were united in death.)

Interesting retake on the canon story! Poor Bella - all that time in a coma! And all the horror she experienced to put her in that coma.
I like the idea that Bella finally reasoned out how Edward could have left her for her own good, just as she left the family for their own good.
Thanx for sharing!

I can't find your rec.

Another great story!

Loved this story.
I love Bella and Jasper's friendship, in every fanfic I read. I especially love the way they communicate silently. Nicely done.
And I love how this is a great divergent from the canon. Especially the sequel. Most fanfictions follow the canon to an annoying degree, but this is a fresh fanfiction for me. Thanks for writing it.