Reviews for Death of the Fourth Hokage
Dark Red Eclipse chapter 1 . 8/1/2017
why doesn't Minato just charge the elders for treason I mean come on there is so much back room planning and betrayels why not charge them with treason, my other point is I wonder how Naruto will take to being used as a weapon by the council I think he should go a similar route to Sasuke cannon
78Staples chapter 6 . 8/7/2015
Great chapter as always can't wait for the next one
Geroar chapter 4 . 12/11/2014
Hey! I really like your story. But when i look at the date of last update it seems as if it has been a while, it says 2011 and it's almost 2015. Have you abandoned the storie? If not then please start writing again.
Greyhat chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Love the characters in this story.
DisasterMaster445 chapter 6 . 6/20/2013
I noticed that it's been sometime since you've updated. I hope you plan on continuing, because this is a very good series of fics that I'd hate to see go unfinished. Also, I'm sad to see the deaths of Ichigo and Edward.
davisboy chapter 6 . 11/28/2012
Oi! do you have an estimate when is the next chapter supossed to come out?
I'm looking foward to it:)
jamuraa chapter 6 . 3/9/2012
awesome story cant wait for chapter 7
Laura-Jean95 chapter 6 . 12/24/2011
Merry Christmas! I lovd your first story and I'm looking forward to reading more, I think sometimes there are inconsistancies, Naruto's relationship with both Anko and Minato are very mixed and unbelievable at times because he sets up to have a Sasuke like view about his parents like the cannon view on his brother. Then it gets very confusing. It's fine, your other characters are credible and believeable but that would be the only fault I can think of right now. I say this because I really love your story and If you ever decide to revise or edit it, perhaps at the end because I'm sure everyone wants to see what happens next, it would only make the story better.

I hope you have a wonderful christmas and a happy new years. :)
IAmAFreakingNinja chapter 6 . 12/24/2011
Srry I didn't log in :P. Anyway good chap! So now orachimaru (that's how u spell it rit!) is here... The suspense is killing me! Update soon
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 5 . 12/5/2011
Heh, man oh man oh man! Things are REALLY starting to heat up now, aren't they? Orochimaru planning an invasion, twisting Kurotsuchi (and Iwagakure by extension) to do his bidding, planning to assassinate the Kazekage already, and got plans for snatching up several of the Jinchuuriki at once.

The Council putting pressure on Anko and Minato to finally get a child, even as they're plotting to remove Minato from office (which seems hypocritical to forcing them to have a child).

And innocent, little Team 7 is already starting to experience strange side effects from the heightened training that's being enforced upon them. Man, I can't help but pity Sakura as she's well on her way to getting two sensei and a ruthless shishou.

Yes, I'm very interested in what happens next. Please don't take quite as long to update, okay?
NaruTem lover chapter 5 . 12/5/2011
Yeah u updated! Great chap. I can't wait 4 there mission. Keep up the good work!
IAmAFreakingNinja chapter 4 . 12/2/2011
You r an amazing writer! I spent two straight hours just reading your story! Please please make more soon! I'm officially addicted!
NaruTem Lover chapter 4 . 11/17/2011
Awesome. Sakura seduction, lol. Go Temari teach sak how to control those boys!
A Reader chapter 4 . 11/13/2011
Great story. It's funny and romantic and suspenseful all at once.
AgentAwesomeishere chapter 4 . 11/2/2011
Awwww such a sweet friend moment. Lolz Naruto is a pervert. And Temari taught Sakura how to influence boys. That is to die for. Anyway update! :D
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