This looks really good, please continue on

Really great, please continue xx

This is a really excellent story so far, brilliantly written and the premise is great. I can't wait for more.

Had to look up "puling" to see if it wasn't a typo-it wasn't. I like this. Looking forward to more. :)

Please do continue with this! I would love to see the direction you take with this!

I really hope there's more to this story, because I definitely like the beginning and am looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!

This is a really well written story. I'm not really sure where its going but I suppose that's the point of stories! I really really like it so far.

Keep writing.