Wow, simply beautiful piece. I really like the last part where he ordered the lake toya and argued with the manager. Really like this!

... Hanako, lol.

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...I need to get more sleep, I think. ;P

Aw, Chibi!Joui4 are so cute~ And I feel that your pieces really do capture Gintoki's personality and the overall humor of Gintama pretty well.

"His complex was acting up again." That line was my favorite. XD

This made me smile :) It was cute and I happen to love Zura's nerd-i-ness. :3

Good story! i love gintoki! XD