Reviews for Playing With Fire
Darkloedpotter chapter 30 . 5/27
Disappointed in this fic as it was not even close to HPGW as it should have been. But its your story.
Another annoying thing is the never ended spelling mistakes and grammar errors.

But overall a nice 3 fics
DaemonTodd chapter 30 . 11/16/2019
I dont normally enjoy fics without a dominant romantic arc, but thks fic and series has managed to keep me thoroughly engaged all the way through.
This series is without a doubt the best thought out fic I have read. I still have issues though. Bad grammar and vocab missuse. I can forgive it if you dont spark English natively though. Despite the bad writing it is well written. (Oxymoron?). Thanks MK. A brilliant fic series
HeartsGlow chapter 11 . 10/30/2019
And still, no one knows what Arthur has wrought. :(. Loved the end though!
HeartsGlow chapter 10 . 10/30/2019
"She was as much of the reason they were apart"... that's bull crap. I read all three parts of the Trilogy to this point pretty much all this week. I have gone back to check things as I read. After finally viewing Harry's memories Ginny stayed by his side when he was in the hospital. You had written back then that he KNEW she was there while in his coma. HE spent more time outright avoiding her and/or misunderstanding her actions and not giving her any chance to explain (or even asking her). The result being that she had NO CHANCE to do anything about it! "Neither Ron or Hermione were too pleased with his seemingly cavalier attitude regarding them, a change he was honor bound to not divulge the reason for". WHAT!? Previously you implied that Harry fully intended to let the rest of Arthur's family know what he had done. Harry is not honor bound in any way to not divulge what happened. "There'll be no memory charms to protect you this time Weasley" (Harry to Arthur) "I don't need one because I know you'll never divulge the reason for your leaving"~ Arthur. "You're wrong! I won't go quietly into the night" ~Harry
HeartsGlow chapter 9 . 10/30/2019
Darn, I thought Harry would tell Fleur about Arthur.
HeartsGlow chapter 8 . 10/30/2019
The lightning bolt on his forehead shouldn't cause him any problems. The original was removed when he was in a muggle hosp. The one he carries now was added for some stupid reason by his healers at St. Mungos. I can't believe Arthur keeps making mistake after mistake. I'm also thinking that if Harry had never become a Knight in the first place, his life would have gone so much better.
HeartsGlow chapter 6 . 10/30/2019
"The gaping wound of Vodemorts spectral basilisk still festered"...how could that be when he healed it in the 2nd part of the Trilogy with phoenix fire?
HeartsGlow chapter 5 . 10/29/2019
He should have asked her what she'd do if others conspired to keep her and Ron apart. He should have left her in her misery, too
Andi Aradan chapter 2 . 9/29/2019
Wow, Arthur sure turned into a fucking hypocrite, didn't he? I really hope he comes around later because this shit is ridiculous.
Fishturbine chapter 30 . 8/11/2019
I genuinely enjoyed this series, it's a little long winded at times, the plot tends to meander occasionally and often the dialogue is repetitive (the Weasley's talking about how awesome Harry is, Draco's gushing etc.) And this ending sucked.

That said the series made me cry, made me laugh so hard I cramped up and despite the annoying things I've said it was a page turner and had enough action and intrigue to keep me engaged.
J. El Lions Lohn Caesar chapter 30 . 7/11/2019
absolutely brilliant, a great story that has been crafted beautifully. Well done and many congratulations to what you have achieved here.
Mark Sinfield chapter 30 . 3/21/2019
Another excellent story thanks
Ace McKnight chapter 30 . 11/10/2018
That was rather bittersweet. A fine ending, but not what I'd have expected. Through the whole story you've done a great job of character development in a believable way. I'm glad to have read this story to completion.

One thing that was never quite explained (at least as far as I noticed) is what happened to Harry's empathic abilities? It was mentioned several times that he didn't have them anymore, but I don't recall a reason being given. That's really the only unresolved question of importance that I had.

Thanks again for a thrilling ride through this well crafted world.
dolph25 chapter 30 . 5/18/2018
Great series. Thank you
Just William chapter 4 . 11/23/2017
What is the meaning of "gapped"? Or do you mean "gaped"? I think you do mean gaped.
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