What the hell you had a good thing going and you stop I was getting into it I wanted to know who it was even though I know it was probably soul if that's what you were going for. But anyways like I said WHAT THE HELL!?

PLEASE KEEP GOING... THIS SHOULDN'T BE A CLIFFHANGER!

I went to the other site to finish the story because THAT WAS A CLIFFHANGER AND A HALF! lol

I am very pleased with this story because you took it into another direction that most people don't think of and that is soul being the vulnerable one. I really liked it and thought it was beautifully written. Thank you for entertaining me with this )

This is super cute.
I love how you made Soul the damaged one instead of Maka, not because I like him to suffer but because you wrote it so cutely.
The way you wrote this depicting how Soul knows her better than she does was just fabulous.
Also, I love your Maka/Soul interaction and how she comforts him 3

{melts into a puddle of pure fangirl adoration}

At first, I think it's pretty obvious that Soul is Maka's admirer, but good golly gosh I literally squealed at the Limo part, because that's just so sweet *w* and aah it's just so nice, and there were parts where I like cried because it's just a nice story 3

This story was...beautiful.

I picked up hints that Soul was Maka's secret admirer, just by the fact that he didn't "freak out" over her pre-prom presents, but I did not expect (and thus, perversely enjoyed) him to, well, rebel so much when Maka tried to find out his true feelings for her. I have several Soul Eater stories that I enjoy and have favorited, but this will have a special place in my "read over and over again" list because of how you tied it all together. I can take citrus fics or leave 'em, being more drawn to straight fluffy, WAFF types of stories, but I must say you did their love scene quite well. *thumbs up*

It's nice to see Soul as the reluctant, shy partner for once - and for a valid reason, too. Now you'll have to pardon me, 'cause I gotta read your story again!

Good job. It's always cute to read prom stories and it's nice to see Soul being the worried one instead of Maka for once. Keep writing.

This was amazing! They weren't OCC at all! It started sweet, it ended intense.

Love this!

Love It!
FYI The links For Maka's dress Liz's dress are no logaer up.
I like to see the dresses if you sitll have the pics
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EPIC. WIN. I first heard about this story in your variation of it in Lemon Wavelength, so no surprise as to who it was for me! I really liked this story a lot. You did a really good job! Romantic and cute, but angsty also. Nice!

I really thought this was really cute.

Amazing ending, very fluffy and lemony at the same time :D

Nice story!

Somehow this story is making me think about my high school prom. The theme to my prom was Classical Hollywood. From what I heard from my friends, they loved it and enjoyed it very much (I didn't get to go because I didn't have money to go). From the beginning of the chapter, it kinda makes me wonder who on earth would send such a detail present until the second chapter told me the answer. The first time I read it, I was like: 'Who could he be?' and now that I read it again, there were some clues to who he was. This story was so sweet and fluffy. The last chapter was a perfect way to end a wonderful story such as this. Nice job! :)

"Maka," Soul whispered. "If you weren't pleased, I'm sorry."

Did you read the Doujin that had this line in it? XD Pretty much the exact line.

YAY smut. 3

I know most people are like 'Ugh, prom night, really?'... and normally, my voice would be among those in the crowd, Soooooo cliche (not to mention my prom night SUUUUUCKED. Thank Shinigami for sorority/frat formals to make up for it!). BUT! I adore this story... I actually squealed when the 'secret admirer' was revealed. Apparently, I am 13 today. And in my opinion, there is never anything wrong with a little smut. ;) I don't have my eternal frat boy of a husband around right now (damn Marines) for entertainment (not like THAT... okay, well mostly not *that*, but because if you get a group of Marines in a room and just listen to their banter and chest-puffery, it's quite funny, even if it's a little risque) so this girl could use a little smut in her life!

I personally love that you show a slightly different side to some of the characters. In my oh so humble opinion, it gives them more depth, makes them more real. As always, love the stories. Also, crazy dancing is the best kind of dancing!