awesome!~~

Dear Wondrous:

Just thought I should mention: Grover is a faun. A fawn is a baby deer.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

Great Job! Finally, someone freed Grover from the Land of stories

Excellent. Amazing. This story really shows all the characters in the way they should be seen, I think. That sentence does not make sense. What I mean is that they are all in character and true to form.

This is amazing and very insightful

thank the gods somebody finally mentions grover

Cool. To be honest, when the Son of Neptune hadn't come out yet, I was a little worried about that too. I was also worried about Jason and Percy being considered completely equal by everybody, which really doesn't work. This was good, though. Hit the nail on the head

I have to say, your ending to that was ... INCREDIBLY AWESOME!
I like how Jason sorts out the differences between the camps; the description was spot-on. :D And another thing I'd like to note: I just LOVE Grover in this! Go G-Man! People totally don't give him enough credit, for what it's worth. Great portrayal of him! :D
Great story writing, just like the others.

I like how Jason met Grover!

Awesome story I wish it wasn't a one shot.

ok, something's fucked up with the login, but this is going on my favorites as soon as it's fixed!

I really loved this.

You did a really good job bringing Jason's fear to realistic light.

nice. :)

Wow, you're an awesome writer!

Just wanted to say that I love it!