| Reviews for James and Lily: The Beginning of Legacy |
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   EmeraldFlower24 chapter 9 . 8/17/2019 'These boys, they were her marauders.' This line perfectly describes their bond. I love them all so much. |
| EmeraldFlower24 chapter 5 . 8/17/2019 Can't help smiling like an idiot. Loving the story. |
| HPandPJO4ever chapter 44 . 11/30/2018 This is really good! |
| HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 42 . 5/24/2018 Great story, though I’m sure to bawl my eyes out when I read all the others. |
| Mattelle chapter 5 . 8/4/2017 i have read most of your stories about Harry and decided to try this because I love your writing style. Just want to let you know that you do not disappoint! This is brilliantly written and vet funny! Thanks. Keep up the good work! I'll now read anything you rite and am favoriting you as an author! |
| ThatCrazyFangirl7 chapter 13 . 5/19/2017 Omg! This was too sweet! |
| ThatCrazyFangirl7 chapter 9 . 5/19/2017 This is so good! In a lot of fanfics when the parents die I'm just kind of like "Oh that's sad." But in this story I could really feel what the characters were feeling! The emotions were so real! Love this story! ️️️️️️️ |
| Guest chapter 44 . 12/10/2016 Me can we have a sequal |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/23/2016 Try to remember this... THEY'RE LIVING IN 1977 AND BLOODY BRITAIN! |
| J Green chapter 6 . 7/23/2016 I had a similiar idea for that prank, but instead of it being for a laugh, it was because the Marauders had heard that if you imagine people are in your underwear when public speaking, you don't get nervous, and Pete was so obviously nervous in one class, James magicked everyone's clothes off (Sirius was naked and didn't care for an added bonus) including the teacher's |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/26/2016 Alice had no right to say that because those were facts. Lily was a bitch before and she needs to know that. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/25/2015 I think this is well done and interesting. The main critique I have of this chapter is that it's sometimes difficult to know where the characters are-during James and Sirius' fight it wasn't clear that they were in the dormitory-and also some of the scene changes were unclear. Simply marking scene changes with a dash could solve this. But overall very well done. |
| Guest chapter 32 . 6/6/2015 Hey! You're an amazing writer and I love this so much! Just one thing because I'm a bit of a nitpicker haha sorry: Lily's birthday is on January 30th, not in March :) I know this because we share a birthday! Keep writing, you are super talented Have a nice day :) |
| harryislife chapter 44 . 5/24/2015 Loved it! It was so funny andso well written. To be honest it is really hard for me to pick out any faults. So many Jily stories make Lily act superior, and James, instead of pulling funny pranks, make him actually meaan. It was Brilliant. |
| ervin chapter 34 . 5/12/2015 I know I'm a little late to the party, but Thank You. I really wanted her to be decent. |
