| Reviews for Smithereens |
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   Bethesda551 chapter 5 . 4/21 update!? plzzzzzzz |
| sandranegocios chapter 1 . 9/7/2018 One of the issues I find with the friendship/Hurt/comfort fic of H50 is that it comes to the point of cheesy or just becomes cheesy and so non believable. Your story is the opposite. The way you let us into Danny's raw emotions is masterful. The way you show how H50 is truly OHANA, is so clear in the short images -chin speaking in Steve's ear, D, K, C walking together through the hospital corridors among others- The image of the tangled bodies is so powerful and beautiful. I love that this story is about friendship/brotherhood...OHANA. Thank you so much for sharing it. |
| Dimac99 chapter 5 . 5/6/2015 Despite Steve being unconscious for most of this, you still manage to write fantastic friendship fic. And I adore your Danny rants, they're just spot on. |
| studio62 chapter 5 . 8/21/2014 Such a great, well-written story. I don't know if anyone writes the inner workings of Danny and Steve's brains quite as well as you can. Seriously. I keep coming back to your stories again and again and enjoy them every single time because they are so incredibly...real. Loved to reread this one tonight. I hope you're not done with H50 and we'll see more of you in this fandom soon. If not, I'll continue to read and reread to my heart's content! :) Thanks for sharing your talent! |
| Elanshaw chapter 5 . 4/21/2014 One of the best friendships on tv...you wrote this so well. The love the guys have for each other shone in your story. Well done.. |
| john'sgirlfriend2date chapter 5 . 8/22/2013 Wow, what an image to have in my brain. So cool! Thanks. |
| Sparkiebunny chapter 5 . 3/10/2013 Amazing story! Loved the emotion and detail. Great work! :) |
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/2/2012 really good! |
| sorree chapter 5 . 9/1/2011 Wow this was great ! Couldn't stop reading. Is there a sequel? |
| francis2 chapter 5 . 7/25/2011 This was a wonderful tale about friendship. I adore how you wrote the characters, especially Danny. Thank you! |
| francis2 chapter 3 . 7/25/2011 I totally love this internal rant. Love it to bits! |
| francis2 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011 Oh my what a predicament! I need to read on! |
| wotumba1 chapter 5 . 7/25/2011 good to have him back! wonderful story |
| wotumba1 chapter 4 . 7/25/2011 great idea having the team describe the injuries |
| wotumba1 chapter 3 . 7/25/2011 nice wish ;) |
