Really good

[twitch twitch] this was a really good story... cept the piercin part [shivers] shouldnt have imagined getting one...

Ahaha, that was just too funny :] Plus, Takari is my all time fav couple. I think fanfiction needs more of these short stories, And it was easy to follow with so there wasn't any confusions :P keep writing!

Excellent! This was very good, i loved it

Please please pleasee please please write another Takari! You only have two :( change it your an amazing author :) :) :) :) :)

That was so lame it made me puke...

This is a story I can say without a doubt I love. I actually felt what the cahracters did, and i did not find them out of character either. I can't say I thought and acted the same when I was 12 to when 16 especially when it came tyo my opinion or actions towards my siblings. Things and people change it's a part of growing up. I read this story multiple times, and reading this actually put it in my head to make a fanfiction account and already crank a story of my own out. i gotta say thanks for that, and I gotta say thanks for this story. Don't stop writing I can't wait to read more of your work.

i loved this story!

its awesome how you added black veil brides to it because that is the best band ever!

and you made one perfect story!(ive used waaay too many exclamation points but i should add more)! :)

Aw, just great

it was witty, romantic, teenage-dramatic, fantastic

I don't think they were ooc...both of them are 16, hormone-driven teenagers, they are completly normal and want to be recognized as young adults...so they have to stand their ground, even with piercings and hairdye XD

I actually didn't think that they were ooc. They were just grown up. I mean, you could see it coming out with TK in season two when he smacked Ken. Most eleven year old kids aren't too rebellious. Regardless of whether or not they were ooc though, it was a great story. I liked seeing them do all of those crazy things. I like portraying Takari with a little wild side. They're good kids, but they aren't without fault and/or guilty pleasures. Good to see something realistic.

I liked this story. It is was a good, funny fic :)

That was a fun story. Good for a laugh!

Yolei's reaction was hilarious. That *would* be the first thing she notices. And yeah, maybe it was a little OOC, but it was good OOC! Rule of Funny most certainly applies in this case!