This is an interesting crossover. Do you plan to continue it?

So I read this whole story from chapter 1 till 10. And I have to say that I like it. Makoto X Ranma seems like a good pairing (also because I dont like Akane).

Hope there is more of this in the pipe.

And when will we see Miss Kino become the new Mrs. Saotome? :)

I hate this Ranma balancing out between 2 genders, it's a curse, I don't see why Ranma has to see himself as half girl, any more than Genma has to see himself as half panda.

The only reason the Joketsuzoku would care about such places are the gender, they do pretty much precisely the same to men, as such places do to women, the only difference is they call it marriage, but considering they are ready to use threats mind control and murder to force the men to marry them, there's no real difference between their turning people into breeding stock, and what those in that camp was doing.

Cologne might have opposed such places, but only because she's a misandrist, and she only believe such treatment is acceptable when the victim is male.

Not to say I find such a place at all acceptable, I just hate when misandrists are portrayed as less vile than misogynists, discrimination is equally vile, regardless of whether it's targeted at men or women.

So all in all, I'm glad Ranma tore down that place, but I'm less than thrilled, that he remember Cologne fondly.

Great story can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. It's great to see Mako get some love this time rather than the usual Moon getting it all. Keep up the good work.

So much info dump.

Really need to work on real dialogue because right now, it's just not good.

Not bad, but not good.

tonite is tonight

I just finished reading this for the third time I've noticed a bunch of stuff. It sounds like the baddies have Ryouga.

It was nice to see that Mako has her powers back. And Shampoo is pregnant. Ranma did indeed call it.

All in all this was a great chapter. Don't take too long is the next one. I am looking forward to it.

Glad to see another chapter, I know how hard it can be to write one! Nice to see some plot threads revealed here. Have a very bad feeling about who the female angel hybrid will be (works well as a Kaworu analogue) I was expecting something more along the lines of 'Rei' showing up in the later stages of the 'EVA' contribution to the plot. Introduction of married Shampoo will also be interesting to explore here as well. Not to mention the potential for 'Sensei Cologne'.

Great to see more on this story! keep up the great work and thanks for sharing!

Fantastic chapter, and it's so good to see that it wasn't that you abandoned this story, it just refused to write itself! Keep up the amazing work!

uuhhhh...

Info dump after info dump, people don't talk like that! Ever heard of "show, don't tell"? Incredibly long paragraphs boring as something something, sharing life stories with far to much details pointlessly...

I got exhausted of skimming it before the halfway through.

Consider rewriting this monstrosity of a chapter if you want more people to read your story.
Just get me past the first chapter so I can get into it.

The quality of your story, ZRO4825, is more than welcome against the wait.
Thank you for your updates.

I'm incredibly happy this has been updated, but I'm still waiting for the Evangelion plot to kick in. Any idea in how many chapter that will be?

Well, at least you got this chapter up... Was feeling bored, nothing to do... Decided to press the Update button on the Fanfiction Reader App... And was surprised by this new entry... Actually re-read this thing a good number of times... Never thought that it'd get another update... Thanks! Be looking forward to your next chapter...

It's a good chapter, BTW... Forgot this was the reviews section, not the comments...