Bro, why would you sleep with someone you KNOW fucked someone else literally less than 24 hours before. But then again this Bella was nasty enough to master bate on a New York subway. So yeah

Great writing! Super hot, you should definitely continue this.

Loved it! Awesome job! P

The first couple of paragraphs were kinda iffy but as the story progressed it became better and better and HOTTER. Alice with pierced nipples is amazing and Bella thinking it was all a dream was priceless. Maybe you could do a follow up chapter in Alice's POV?

Masturbation on a public transportation-HOT!

Fantasizing about hot neighbor while masturbating on public Transportation-Hot diggiddy dog HOT!

Hot neighbor blowing a fuse-Hot!

Hot neighbor giving you massage while you are topless with lotion-STEAMY HOT!

Hot Neighbor massaging your nipples-hmmmmm,hot hoT hOT HOT!

Explosive Orgasm with hot Neighbor-Hot, yeah baby Hot!

Thinking all the above is a dream -not sot hot :(

Finding out the above is indeed NOT a dream- Priceless!

Now let's enjoy the steamy hot sex shower with the hot neighbor- cuz how else can you be but HOT HOT HOT with the hotty hot neighbor.

Have I said hot enough time...possibly more time that Paris Hilton in a Simple life episode(reality show from the past with Paris Hilton & Nicole Richie)...Paris catch phrase was" that's hot" :))

I enjoyed the writing. Good job! Short,sweet, and poignant. I have read at least 2 thousand Bellice fanfic(ff)...and let's just say I have commented on less than 5 of them and obviously yours inspired a comment out of me. I am hard to please...and this was nice. 4.5 stars out of 5 only because I am a hard nose or you would definately have earned a 5 star if I was the average ff reader.

Great JOB!

Oh my god awesome story! Very good hope to see more from you!

Going to take a shower...Wooo, very hot stuff babe! xoxo

Wow Dolly that was scorching hawt! Awesome mwah ... will there be more?