Omg I LOVE IT! :) Please update!

WOW!

I love it.

Amazing! How can you possibly have not acknowledged that you are the best author to ever post anything on here. Seriously. I am indebted to you for even letting me read such a thing :P

That is quite possibly the best fan fiction I have ever read, and I am a saddo for reading fan fiction. And a saddo for Twilight. And a saddo for anything medicine-related (paediatrics especially, but this was just as good as something with kids in because it has vampires!). My only complaint is that it is not true to the book, but it doesn't really matter because it's so good, and you did at least warn me :)

It was just brilliant. I even loved the name: Red Emeralds - awesome. And I'm going to be rude enough to tell you that you simply MUST rethink your future career choice. If you do not become an author, I may have to kill you :P

Also, thanks for the YouTube link...

I guess I have nothing more to say except: please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please write something else. Pleaseeeeee?

'Sall

xxxxxx

That had to have been the best transformation I have ever read. These are brilliant descriptions:

"

In the next millisecond of time, a burst of wholly overwhelming, obliterating misery collided in my body and mind. It was like a ton of bricks fell, twenty knives stabbed, four cars drove over, two bullets shot, and one ripped out heart were taking place in my chest alone. I choked, I shook, I screamed so loud; loud enough to shut off the humming of language in my brain for a long moment. My eardrums didn't hear anything besides the continuous wail from the deepest depths of my body.

A violent, jagged stabbing pierced the side of my neck, my eyes opening in alarm while my body recoiled from the vicious attack. I couldn't get away. I was too weak. The ripping tear held too much pain. I realized they were hands that were holding me in place, my hand, my face. That hand that was on my own was now clamped down on my chest as I tried to escape this painful death. I saw blonde in my right corner's eye view, a blonde person. An angel? A demon sucking away the years of my life that I will never meet? It must have been the latter, fire seethed in the cut. Hell it was after all for me."

I even loved your descriptions of the influenza and you put some nice historical facts in there. And to think you almost scared me off with the introduction when this story is actually someting to rave about.

F...ing Perfect!

This is sheer epicness!