Reviews for The Right to Be Ourselves |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this story so far, can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() fitting name for the chapter :) wow *bows* |
![]() ![]() Ur on a roll |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha I like dr pepper |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there fruity-guy-sir, just wanna tell you to update soon. Make more stories too. Thanks and ciao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tori's life just got a hell of a lot more complicated. of course, jade could just figure things out, come clean, and Tori would only have a little explaining to do. But that's not likely. Or is it? Either way, Tori needs to look out, cause Deana could be an extra complication that she doesn't need. Insecure, hyper jealous jade might not want to share her toy. I suspect Jade's getting closer to wanting to commit. It's the in the open part she's not ready for. So, next time, we find out how all this shakes out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story, i'm so waiting for more of this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Trina had a bad date. But I'm sure, once she sees that Jade's not like that, she'll be more accepting. Then again, maybe Trina just needs a good date. As for Tori, pnce she clears her head and can think straight, she can accept that Jade isn't a threat. Jade showed a vulnerability no on, except maybe Beck, has seen. So, next chapter please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, if Jade was pushing me down kissing me, I'd really like Dr. Pepper too. But in all seriousness, the story is really good. Tori's wondering why it didn't feel right to kiss Mitch, then she kisses Jade and she's at a complete loss. She doesn't know which way is up and it feels like time stops. I say if you like something, you like it. Denial just postpones your happiness most of the time and your mind works against you in these situations |
![]() ![]() OKAYyyyyy...I'm Loving This Story...Please Dont Stop...I'm Waiting For The Next Update...Ur Story Is Sooooooooo Cooooool I Cant Wait For The Next Chp -countess |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, really enjoying the story and looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jade's got a problem, or multiple problems. Tori has her journal, and possibly some new guy to crush on. Then she got grounded for who knows what by a father she seems to both hate and need. The goth is sounding very damaged. Tori made the big discovery. How will she adapt to that news? And is Jade the cure for her butterfly problems? Things are going to get interesting, cause the only way to let Jade know she knows is to admit she read the other girls journal, and that's a betrayal. So how are you going to fall in love with your story again? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update :) Way worth it :P :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, so worth the wait! |