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Whahahah

Liked it instantly whahahahah. Cool scenario.

Loved their chemistry!

Omg love love love! very lovely and heartwarming story.

such raw emotions in this chapter wow wow wooow I loved it! Their companionship is truly beautiful, it feels like they can do anything together, they just don't know how powerful that is, and how they could make things so simple...ah, so good!

kinda bummed about the aniversary (I think I felt exactly like Sakura HAHAHA) but it's normal and fiction I need to pull myself together, on the other hand omg is there a real Naruto out there?He is so sweet I almost cry he is so honest and raw with everything he does uuurrgggh

hihihihi yellow lemon hihihihihi baby making hihihihi these two should go ahead hhehhehehhe

it's so weird but interesting to see the difference between cultures, where I live if they acted like they do people would be at least a little bit suspicious, we are mostly into pda, holding hands, hugging and even kissing in public hahahah
also can't wait for them to be together for real...they deserve sooo much

I'm heartbroken this is PERFECT there's not a single thing that isn't great, beautiful, spetacular, everything I wanted from the original, but you made it even better, you are a damn good writer I can't believe how good this is omg I can't you're awesome, your story is awesome it's pure perfection

i love this. THANK YOU so much for this beautifully written well fleshed out story with just the right amount of everything. I can't believe this is going to be almost a decade old and it's still so good.
This is sooo increidbly well written and has aged so well. And I love the end scene. It was just the rights amount of funny when Sasuke was translating naruto's panicked words for him

This is just the best NaruSaku fic i have come across and I am so glad I came across it

I- I am really sorry Ino doesn't get to be a part of this and that Sakura can't share anything with her
I think you described Naruto's afterthoughts so beautifullly that he had been in love with her as long as he could remember so this was a conlclusion of his feelings. But sakura... this was a realization

The entire meeting scene was just- it was so beautifully written

I LOVE this sooo much. I cannot thank you enough firstly, for bringing my ShikaIno so beautifully into this story. I have loved htem for as lonng as i can remember.

The sceene with the baby?It is always so emotional when someone so incredibly close to you give birth to a tiny human and to hold that tiny human and be so consumed with so much love for it, the moment she lifted her eyes, of course she met his. I could see the entire scenem picture it so perfectly. Like that is such a moment to SHARE. Like- you have such a talent for words

ahhhaahaha I just always assumed since they're well into their 20s they'd definitely have done it. I also thought that Sakura might not have since she was pinning after Sasuke for so long that once that ended it owuld have soured any romantic relationship for her for a long whilte. Whereas Naruto on the other hand I think he for sure would have had a body count of 1 or 2 at the very least.

BUT ALSO the kiss at the end was SO cute and I love Ino okay and SHikamaru and just thank you so much for having them as a side pairin

Okay your ability to write it otherworldly because when naruto said 'panty' in a meeting, albeit with his close friends, I had to step away from my laptop sreen for a bit hold my face in my hands for a good few seconds to try and get rid of the second hand embarrassment. And I tuned back in, fully expecting this to pass by and we almost got through it, ALMOST, until Sai had to interject and Naruto lost his train of thought and so did the others. And it was a VERY wholesome scene but aaah. I loved it. I wish this existed for Naruto in canon, this happiness and closeness with his friends.

I LLOCED the kitchen scene, it was so unseemly and small but Sakura was right to think it was intimate. I can't believe the managed to be friends for this long without having noticed this OBVIOUS tension between them.