aww this looks so promising! very well written. i wish this was continued T_T

Ah excuse me the rest please. You set it up so we'll, granted what would step two even be since in this case Naruto is in his right mind but you're such a great writer I can't help but want more

ooooooooh sounds like this would be a good story.

Beautiful!

Is this fanfic dead?

Please update I really like this story and need more

This is so sad. The last two paragraphs nearly have me in tears. Amazing work. I don't normally get so emotional in such a short amount of time, but it's something the best of writing can bring out of me. I'm disheartened that you haven't continued this, because I know there's a fantastic story here waiting to be told, but I'm willing to be patient to wait for it. What you already have is awesome. I can't wait to read what else you have in store.

Having read all of your works, I can honestly tell you that you are immensely talented. Thank you for sharing your work with us. If there is another venue where I can read more of your words (even one not involving Naruto) please let me know. I would be happy to read whatever you produce.

Please updaate D: this story is greeeeaaaatt!

cute

I need a chapter 2!

updatee

that was good keep the chapters coming

Are you going to continue this?

I liked this fic! I liked the explanation of how Naruto survived his jutsu and why he would have to be sent to another world for his death to still matter. Very cool! Thanks for writing!

love it I cannot wait to see what more you come up with for this fic and to see more of your work I love how you write Naruto he is awesome