I loved the familial interaction. Especially with Toph but I could totally see her getting a punch in there as well as a hug.

That. Was. EPICNESS! #Over9000

One word: HORRIBLE

How about a Sokka/Suki/Toph piece for a sequel? Basically, Toph is interested in a having a threesome with Sokka and Suki, she convinces Suki to do it as a gift for all the things he's done for them.

best.. porn story... ever

aaaaaand favorited! absolutely loved it!

Bow chika bow wow.

Goddamn this is well written.

Great work on this.

Beautifully written. Loved all the descriptive writing and especially naive Toph!

So, so good.

Everyone is beautifully portrayed and kept in character.. Not to mention how fucking sexy it is. I only wish it was more than a one-shot. But alas, not all my wishes come true.

Anyway, the point is.. this story is excellent.

Amazing. I love how vividly you paint the picture. This is Maiko erotica done right :)

interesting, has poential for great sequal

Why yes, this was indeed quite hot!

Excellent quality lemon! Beautifully erotic and full of joy and

love .

They certainly make a very sexy trio.

I wish there was more T.T

MMM that was delicious, I think that is one of the best M fanfictions I've ever read, also along with the most descriptive, which is a good thing

This was without a doubt, the most elegant M-rated story I've ever read. It was truly written by a great writer who knows how to paint a picture of his thoughts using only words.

My only personal regret is not having certain parts a bit more descriptive and drawn out (i.e. the "finish" of the three participants).

That being said, again, probably the most overall well-written M-rated one-shots on this website. Great job.