Reviews for Operation: Scorched Earth
Esme chapter 13 . 7/5
Best Alex Rider fanfic I’ve read ever!Amazing story.
otterpineapple06 chapter 13 . 7/8/2019
The ending thoooooo ohmygod
Also I've been reading this series of the past few days and am absolutely obsessed the character development is so so so bloody good and the plots and everything ohmygoddddd
Flowersforzoe chapter 13 . 9/9/2018
I love this ending so much. Since Alex put the gun to his head outside the warehouse in Boston, I thought it would end in his suicide. However, you’ve managed the perfect ending. The Alex and Ian interaction was absolutely perfect, from Alex’s nonchalance, to extreme emotion, to stone-cold nothing. You probably won’t see this, but please continue writing! You have serious talent, and I will be the first to read it! I’d even collaborate with you on another story if you don’t want sole responsibility;).
Flowersforzoe chapter 11 . 9/9/2018
This is such a powerful chapter! It’s easy to forget in canon how horrible Blunt really was. It was interesting to see Alex relive his missions. I loved his struggle and perspective. Also, Virginia is so badass, I love her.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/18/2018
This is the best Alex rider fic I have EVER read! You are literally ten times the writer Anthony Horowitz is. Like seriously by the time you read this review you better have a best selling book or at least be working towards it! And that ending! I know you left it there to elude to the fact that Alex still has a lot more adventures to come but oh my god my heart! Absolutely incredible!
Solance chapter 13 . 7/9/2018
Dear Ms. InK,
Although I doubt you'll receive this with 3 years spanning your last update, I still have a couple things to say In the slightest chance you'll recive this.
I have just spent a better part of a week binge reading this trilogy. The entire seires is marvellous, and one of the best pieces of fiction I have to encounter not only in my half decade of reading fanfiction but in my story and plot was beautifully crafted, the managing of so many pieces and charathers has been simply inspirational.
Before finding this fic I have recently hit a hard patch in my life and this fic has inspired me in so many ways. It has shown me there is always a way, an out. There is a balance to the unvierse even if it seems that the power the undying strain something holds on you, has balances and checks. I sincerely thank you for your work, the inspiration you have sparked in me and the ability to see the world from multipul perspectives.
~Solance
IDAMAZIND chapter 7 . 9/30/2017
OMG, I love radioactive!
Guest chapter 13 . 11/30/2016
Rereading this for the third time, it is just as dramatic and thrilling as I remembered!
LavenderMYSTery chapter 13 . 7/15/2016
Brilliant. That's all I have to say. Literally everyone who has reviewed already has said all that I wanted to, but I'm going to continue on anyway.
You are an amazing writer. I can't believe I went this long without reading any of your stories, but here I am now, better late than never. Sorry for not reviewing on the other two stories of this series. I was so into the whole thing that I just kept going without pause.
Again, a resounding brilliant to everything. Characterization, pacing, plot, consistency - they were all amazing. I felt so invested into the story that by the time it ended I felt like a part of me died due to the loss.
However now, I'm utterly confused as to how I feel about the conclusion. Do I scream and shout over the unfairness of a beautiful cliffhanger, or accept it as an ending fit for the whole premise of the story and what Alex has become? I don't know; I'm just wallowing in mixed emotions. I hate how I wish and don't wish for a continuation. Regardless, it was an amazing adventure.
Thank you! -MYST
atalantide chapter 13 . 4/26/2016
So I've basically binged this whole series in about a day but wow that was really amazing! There are so many amazing Alex rider fanfics out there but hardly any of them are actually captures the missions of an Alex rider book - this really does! I loved the growth of Alex through the book and his relationship with just about everyone but Ive got to say what was with that ending!? I seriously feel the need to now read about how Yassen could possibly NOT be dead but I can't! Anyway I really enjoyed the series so thank you so much for writing and completing it!
slumberingscribe chapter 13 . 8/28/2015
Holy. Shit.
Holy freaking shit.
I know you said there was to be no more, but PLEASE. A plot line this good...
Your characterisation of Alex is superb- your conveyance of the way he grew as a person throughout the series was perfect. The plot twists were just- wow. There were none of the ordinary, over-used plot lines; all of the cannon characters were used with good reason (your use of K-unit, for example, was written in a way that made the entire scenario completely logical and probable); and all of the OCs were very well written. I was concerned about Yedit at first, but when I realised a few chapters in that she wasn't there to hijack the story, I grew to really like her.
The stunts you had Alex perform throughout this series were also excellently done - they were all so believable that the close calls had my heart racing (which could also have been because of those REALLY CRAZY PLOT TWISTS. Really. I kept bracing myself for Alex's death or capture, only for it to not happen so many times that I was in no way prepared for it to actually happen when it did).

From a reader's perspective, you really grew as a writer from the first to the second fic. You really stepped up your game there; everything became so much more intense and generally awesome (not that the first one wasn't awesome, but still). The way you had Alex run got me reading long past when I probably should have stopped, and you didn't make the mistake of forgetting about injuries for the sake of action, which a lot of writers seem to do. The only reason I wasn't showering praise upon you in the form of reviews for every chapter was that it was just too good. I couldn't stop.
My only criticisms are the grammatical errors (mostly from Red Crescent: I found that some of the grammatical issues, which were usually apostrophe-related, detracted a bit from the enjoyment of the fic) and the abrupt lack of Jack in Scorched Earth. You go from Bury Your Dead, which has her frantically working to find a way to free him, to here where she really isn't mentioned, and it's a bit strange. But it's really just nitpicking: Those two things are the only criticisms I could possibly have of your work, because it really is some excellent writing.
Thank you so much for taking the time to create something as incredibly complex as this. It was truly a pleasure to read.
-CS
palladium-46 chapter 13 . 7/14/2015
Goodness. Gracious.

InK, this was epic.

These last few chapters, in particular, were incredibly satisfying, and I love, love, love how you wrote the ending. Alex finally gets vindicated! But we all know that he could never stay away from the world of espionage for long - at least now he gets to do it on his own terms. Had you always planned it that way? Also, that nod to Mrs. Pleasure. :DDDD And while we're on the small details, can I just say, leather jacket Alex? Yesss.

The way you treat Gregorovitch's role in Alex's life, as well as Alex's complicated relationship with Ian - arghhh you do them justice so well, but I have no words to do you justice! And the way you crafted the trial... I didn't know you were pre-law, but you go girl. That part was incredibly fun to read, but also tugged at my heartstrings. And it certainly made me relive the glory of the books, which I haven't touched in probs five years. :)

I feel blessed to have been able to share in this journey (despite concluding several months too late - but real life, heh). You are such a marvelously, tremendously talented author. Thank you, THANK YOU, for giving us the gift of your writing. I dearly hope that you keep going, in whatever way you can, and I also hope that all is going well in your life!

Lots of love! xx
llutien chapter 13 . 2/4/2015
nOOOOO seriously, this is the most epic and thrilling piece of work i have read all year. And last year, cause its still pretty early. bur GODDESS all the plot and character development and i was 100 % sure it would end in Alex's suicide for a while - this is amazing. I'm proceeding to all of your other stories, but this one has been brilliant. All love.
Parrocha chapter 13 . 1/31/2015
Thank you for this terrific story. It kept me going for weeks!
I think this is the best Alex Rider Fanfiction I've till now... (and a had a lot)
Ethyrin Kairos chapter 13 . 12/24/2014
This is awesome. God damn awesome.
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