It's over?! NO!

love the story can you writee anither chapter with more steve and him geting hurt and thhe williams parents x
love it

I never really did like Jameson. Always though she was sneaky.

Loved Danny parents and how well they fit in with the team. And Mrs. Williams adopting Steve.

I'm so loving this story! Its awesome!

This is such a charming story! Bromance for Danny and Steve is so much fun! I love how the Williams family has adopted Steve into their midst! And you can so see how much it meant to Steve, too!

REALLY AWESOME! Loved mamma Williams! Really good job! Now I'm going to read the other ones!

Just finished ch. 1. I always thought Mrs. Williams was Italian (she's Italian in my Fic "gravy" as well) :) Love it so far!

Bravo. As an Italian from NJ (who grew up 1 block from Newark) I'm on Ch 2 and I love Mrs. W. :) Love that Grace calls her Nonna (Will be my title some day). Please write more with Mrs. W. :)

I know this probably odd but McGarrett's Marquis is a 1974

Wo Fat is one scary dude.

What happens next for our intrepid duo?

Oh, angel.

I can't breathe I'm laughing so hard.

Veronica Williams is a hoot.

And I can' wait to read more.

I LOVE IT!

Brilliant and masterful writing!

Just letting you know that I'm enjoying your story.

Mrs. Williams is such a funny character.

It took me awhile to finally find the time to read the last two chapters of this story, but they were great! Though you left so much of the ending wide open! Do you plan on writing a sequel? I really enjoyed reading this story; I'm sad to see Danny's mom go! Hope to see some more stories from you soon :)