This is Amazing sooo cool

Omg that was a crazy ride, just how many Matts are there? I hope a few, if Mello and Matt have sex does that mean here technically having an orgy because Matt has more than one conscious? Hmm... I'm glad t see an update love the chapter but now I have even more questions please keep updating!

Next chapter?

Oh shit. Things are getting scary

Aww. I love this story so much

This is actually really good and is filled with so much drama and secrets I can't help but want to read more! But then I see when you last updated makes me a bit sad. It was just getting really good as we're introduced to a new peraonality. It's well written too except for a few spelling errors and typos but I can live with that. I hope you'll continue soon and NOT forget about it :3

great story - wish for more

So it’s done. Mello confessed. I hope it wasn’t a way to help Matt and that he truly believed it. Matt’s internal fight was, dare I say it, fun to read. See all those personalities express their hatred to Mello like that… And Mello entering the dialogue was even funnier
But the opinion of those personalities was easy to understand if they appeared during the time Mello had betrayed Matt. Maybe that’s why the only one to be somehow okay with Mello is M. I wonder if we’ll get to know more about the differences between them.

While reading this chapter, I found myself looking for the indications about the contacts or lack of between Mello and Matt. Since Matt’s thoughts about wanting Mello to hold him, I’ve been waiting for the moment Mello would try to. When Mello thought he wanted to do so, one of the voices that are in my own head was cheering with popcorn and at the same time, shouting at him “do it already dumbass!” When Mello said Matt was his best mate, the voice facepalmed (It ma be more than a voice if it can facepalm though…) And let’s say it was more than pleased with the end of the chapter!
But the rest of me was pleased as well (except maybe the part that would have liked to read more. But unfortunately, that part is never satisfied so it doesn’t count)

I wonder what is to come now. Will Mello have to deal with Matt’s voices? Will Matt be back on action? You said there would be more about the Kira case now and you may remember how much I love to see Matt interacting with Light. I can’t wait to see more of that! But anything you want to write, I just want to read it and discover where you want the story to go now.

Thank you for the chapter, and I’m glad you had fun writing it. I hope it will be the same for the chapters to come!

I’m glad you were in a writing spree and hope you’re still in one. I also hope your exams went okay and that you aced them! But now, let’s review.

This chapter seemed so short! The cuteness remains with how M is apologising to Near. The frightening thing is how he thinks he was right to do what he did. I wonder what will happen when he realises he is also at cause for fucking Matt’s life up?

But the most important thing for me was Near’s speech. Just before, I read it, I was thinking about how M was a part of Matt. So he is a part of Matt’s personality. During the speech, with that in mind, I was wondering how Matt would be as a whole. Are Near and Mello right to separate M from Matt? Did the traits that M inherited from Matt become much stronger because it became the only basis for a whole new personality? Or would have Matt be a lot like the Mail of other fics from you, such as Yes Master? Does falling in love with Matt involves loving M too? At least understanding M? I think I told you before how interesting it was how different those two personalities were. One thing was, how Matt loves Mello and how M seemed to be more in favour of Near. I can’t remember if it’s true or not but I feel here was the first time M really said he was somehow attracted to Mello. That’s what triggered the thought on Matt’s personality actually.

And I loved the moment M said “you have to take to give.” Not only because it seems to summarise quite well M’s mindset but also because of the mindset I was in, thinking about Matt’s split personality. Is Matt so damn perfect because another personality took his baddest traits?

And what a dramatic revelation at the end! What a headache it would be… but I’m a bit curious to see what other personalities you would give Matt, if M is speaking the truth.

One chapter to go, and I saw it was called revelation… I won’t tell more about this one, I want to read this last chapter you published! Thank you for this inspiring and interesting chapter! I loved it!

Oh, I wanted to say cute… but it seems so misplaced in this fic. But here is the truth: this chapter was totally cute and warm. You know, the way you feel warm inside and have a light smile on your face. I know, you see them fight, you see Matt at a loss, you see Mello at a loss too, but the calm pace, this kind of simplicity within the complexity of it all, the care everybody show to Matt, the way they go back to their childhood somehow, by going back to Wammy, and this sliver of hope in the end are just very heart warming and make the chapter cute.

The scene with the boy was cute too and I wonder who this Anna is. I guess you told us before but I forgot. Anyway, she seemed like a character I’d be able to like. And I liked Roger too in this chapter. I always like it when Roger isn’t a stupid bastard who doesn’t understand anything to children because he hates them and is only running the orphanage for money. And it was cute to see how Matt only answers to Mello.

Thank you very much for writing it!

Hey! It’s been quite a long time since I last read your fic. I’m sorry I wasn’t able to do it earlier. I was wondering when I should pick it up again, because I’m so late and missed so many chapters I wanted to have time to read them and review as I wanted. When I saw you had updated, I thought I couldn’t wait any longer. So just so you know, at the moment, I have no internet in my room. So I put the chapters on a word document, review on the document, and then copy and paste. I read from this chapter to the 49 last night. Here is what I wrote for this chapter, it’s short but the next reviews are longer:

So in the end, it seems this M only used Near… I won’t say anything else, I just want to read the next chapter. Please, bear with my selfishness

Fantastic story! I read it all up to here in the past two days. I really like the way you captured each character and how they have progressed. I'm looking forward to reading on if you continue to update.

Ahhh this is getting better and better! Update soon!

I'm hooked. The end.

IMPROVEMENT