Reviews for Home at Last |
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![]() ![]() Slut |
![]() ![]() That was so sweet. Would love to see a continuation! |
![]() ![]() ![]() There should be more to this, I would love to see their future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. J/B pairing isn't my favorite but once in a while I like it and this one was very good. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad/sweet story! You really put a lot of thought and emotion into this one-shot. I totally enjoyed it - thanx for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I am not usually a Bella/Jasper fan, but I really enjoyed this story. Would love to read more about them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() would love to see more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Jasper, but i loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I so loved this story it was beautiful and i love that it didn't finsih just after the sex that the sex was just part of the story no the ending of it lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet .. Enjoyed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *teaaar* This is amazingly well written. I love the stucture of this story. You're an amazing writer. -BMDB |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I'm glad you didn't follow the usual formula for a military story. This was refreshingly different. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was yummy... but i have a feeling that you could continue with this story! it would be a great chapter story..picking up where you left off. you could talk us through jaspers struggles, her dealing with James and Laurent. maybe even bring in Emmett and Rose again, looking for Jasper. or hell even send them to seattle for something and they can run into Alice and Edward! it could go so many ways. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ummmm yeah... this needs to be more than one chapter :) |