This is a great tale with a confusing ending. I don't know what Howl did. I really don't. Or why he is so worried about it. I think that I was supposed to know, but I am not sure. I'm going to guess that he removed the infertility spell, but I don't know. It's not clear. Not that Sophie seems to care anyway. Am I wrong on that? I just don't know.

That aside this was a wonderful and sad tale with a happy ending. It left me wanting more. I hope that you are still writing!

wow,okaay... a different ending but not bad story at all

I'm crying. I only discovered this fic today, but I've stayed up far to long to finish it and I must say it was well worth it. I'd stay up a thousand times later to read it again. The story played with my emotions in the special way only one story in a million can. Thank you for this gift.

Amazing story. Your English is really good for a nonnative too. Props!

AWESOME.

Hi, I read your entire fiction in one afternoon: it is so intense and well written than I couldn't wait to see the ending. Even if your grammar and style were very good fir the beginning there was a definite improvement as the chapters kept on coming.
At some point I was imagining an ending with Sophie and Turnip after Howl's dead, but it wasn't as blea as that. I loved the story and commend you for not filling it with cliches like needing to have a baby to be a complete family.

It should be "Howl and I are married now.".

What was fantastic, amazing wonderful story! I was crying, smiling, laughing :) I will totally going to favourite this fascinating story and follow in case you decide to continue :) THANK YOU so much for your story :)

perfection... No other words suffice to the brilliance of your writing and this story

this is my go to story for hmc-you are an amazing writer!

This is adorable. I look forward I the rest

This is a fantastic story, I really like it, and has you not pointed out in your author's notes that English wasn't your native tongue, I never would have known. Fantastic!

awesome!

love this story

You have a knack for painting a scene. I found that image of the destroyed train to be particularly well crafted. It's a nice novelty to be reading a slightly darker story for this fandom, i like the fluffy, but there are some very dark elements in the story that very few people ever focus on.