You should do something like Sakura kidnaps Sasuke and takes him to her house where she blackmails him into marrying her and killing naruto and raping him but when naruto finds out when he's on his way to the ramen house, he meets up with kakashi who calls the team to protect naruto and trick Sakura into a trap to put some revenge on her

Ok Im not to good at seroius revews so ill try my best. This was sooooo erotic and i really like yaoi pairs that inculding saske! i really liked the ending it was so funny! ahahaha oh and thanks for the advise/ comments on my fic! /_/

That last line was hilarious. Great story, really funny.

its been a long time since i last read of sasunaru fanfic where Sasuke is very much horny for Naruto's ass.. i like the ending.. nice ending.. keep on writing.. u got potential there..

love it

Very kinky. Great little story. A horny Uchiha is a happy Uchiha. Hahahahahahahaha. Cute and funny, good job.

XD, love to see naru-chan uses sexy costumes.. Yosh, just keep up the good work, ganbatte ne.

Hmm, I like this. And you know what I think would be cool? A story where Sasuke and Naruto meet at an Anime Convention and don't know its each other. It would also be even more ironic if the character's they were cosplaying as were romantically together; which means that it would have to be a yaoi anime, cuz naruto wouldn't work...duh.

Maybe they could go to the same college and over hear the other talking about the 'con and the character they met, and they talk it out and have hot steamy man sex?

Either way, thats my idea, and if you don't use it, I will. :) But I'd prefur it if you'd use it. xD