Ahhh!, que lindo final.

First, I love your story! It's really very good! It's really keeping my attention and the story is excellent. The only thing is that this chapter ending is... disappointing. I mean ALL THAT BUILDUP for a 2 sentence love scene? I'm not saying it should be crazy detailed or dirty or anything, but I would've at least dragged it out a bit longer. It felt so unsatisfying when they FINALLY got together after all that buildup. But otherwise i really love this story and look forward to reading the rest.

no! no! One if inuyasha didn't get together with Kagome's, kagome would find someone for him. two throughout the series the only time he every mentioned going to hell with kikyo was if it was his destiny. he never made a promise. three, she has Kagome's soul. he would kill kikyo even if it hurt to save the one person who didn't call him a half-breed.

I like your story, you did well.

So Kagome hates the colour orange? That's unlucky for Shippo... And quite rude to him as well...

... Oh fuck, now that is complicated... Haha... Haha... Haaaaaaaaaaaaaa... What's going to happen now?

ITS GREAT

Awesome its his turn to brush her hair

Awesome its his turn to brush her hair

I hope they find Rin fast

OOOHHH He let her brush and braid his hair, their getting closer now. Awesome

That was So Awsome!

So cute.

This was a great story, I'm glad I reread it.

great story.