Oh my this is just epic. I absolutely love your writing style and how you describe everything. Fantastic work, and I hope to see an update in the near future.

Just a few loose ends to tie for this journey.

Well I'm a tad tardy. Gotta catch up on the backlogs!
Looks like things will get worse before they get better. Bit off more than they could chew of course. Lose their funding.

hang on, I gotta get some sleep first and recap all the story.
(There's no escaping it. when you're sharing a room with the law, you can't just sneak one more chapter because the law wakes up periodically and it's no good when you are sucked in a story if suddenly a voice in angery scares the heck out of you and realize that dang it's 4am. gotta wait til tomorrow.)

Just spent my whole day binge reading this fic, worth every second. I never even watched Ghost Whisperer but this was written so well I didnt need to. This fic left me on the edge of my seat! Its not often I can find a actual nail biter, thanks for writing!

Ugh I think Falcon is a great villain because he’s so realistic—there are people who are so obsessed just with having control over someone. At the same time though, does nobody in the GIW get that the best way to control something is to understand it? Like, even if you’re not going with ghost’sobsessionreason for existing, protecting is still Danny’s primary drive for everything he does. Falcon won’t have a controllable weapon if he’s literally forcing Danny to do the opposite like when Danny lost control—it will literally destroy Danny and then he won’t even have a Danny to play with.
I’m hoping Vlad can remove/counter the GIW tracker, or together Danny’s allies can remove it—or create something that counteracts it.
Mostly I’m hoping for a moment (OR 20) for the team/family to feel safe/recover/regroup. Just all the hugs and cocoa and tea and movie piles.

I still love this story I'm going to look forward to seeing more of this. I can't wait to see what will happen next.

Sorry that this one is so short I'm kind of buisy.

You have done, as you've said, everything to make Falcon a despicable man. I'm not sure what he is getting at as even when Danny capitulates, he refuses. Is he just trying to drive Danny over the edge so he has an excuse to shoot him? That doesn't make sense as he could just shoot him now rather than face a city-leveling insane monster. He doesn't get more control; he gets less.

Even though the Danny Phantom series is full of battles and fights, this one has a different characteristic that fits more in with Ghost Whisperer. It relies heavily on Danny using his ghost powers in unprecedented ways.

THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME BOOK! Keep up the great work!

Omg omg omg I just read all of this and I love it. Can't wait to see how it ends!

Mea, your story is so amazing! One of the best I've ever read, you should be really proud of yourself. Take your time to wrap up this story, I'll wait patiently.

Just one more thing, if the story's going to end in the near two chapters, are you going to make a sequel or not? Because with the way you've written it so far, it sounds like a sequel could take place.

Anyway that's it for me, keep up the great work!

-Torchbearer

Oh my God my my God yes! You're back! This and Spellbound are my top favorite fanfics, I can't get enough of your writting and imagination. This was a great chapter! I liked the stalemate ending, Danny really proved he was an equal in this fight, not an "inferior creature". The things Falcon knows about Danny's past is really unnerving, I love it. "Danny-boy" Jesus christ. As if the room wasn't enough...
Can't wait to see where this goes now! Will Vlad be back any time soon maybe?

great chapter

Danny is much stronger than I give him credit for.

Yay! A new chapter! After reading it I feel like I just ran a marathon. This is why I follow it.
Nicely done.