Why do u have the notes that your beta left for you in ur story? U do know that they r there right?

what kind of story you wrote?it confusing please rewrite or revamp

i hate the beta note totally annoying

I like when your sentences don't make sense. It's fun trying to figure out how to make it make sense. Plus it always makes me laugh and I love how you don't correct them you just point them out! :D

This was a great story, I'm glad I got to reread it I just wish it was fixed of all the mistakes. I almost gave up on reading it within the first couple of chapters a lot of it was hard to understand.

This has potential to be a great story. So far the storyline is solid. However, they way the story is worded and written needs to be looked at. Beta notes need to be removed, later chapters need to be edited. Unfortunately I will not finish this story, the last six chapters have gotten worse.
Good luck and I hope you fix this story.

Best story I've ever read yet.

Good story idea...but you might wish to reread your own story as you've got random notes in parentheses from your beta stating suggestions through out the story and even in the middle of sentences thus interrupting the flow of the story. It's almost as if you simply posted the chapters after they got through with it rather than read and fix...or remove the notes. I'm sad to say it kinda made me lose interest in finishing the story as it was like this in every chapter I've read so far. I'm not meaning to be harsh...just trying to give freindly advice.

Greatest story I've read in day's.

nice job killing inu but make sure sesshy lives!

I was and still am laghing at the last paragraph. It was PURE GENIUS!

Oh i remember reading commercial he first few chapters of this, but I lost the page.

Wow good start (: I really like it

Ugh. I keep pressing "next chapter" hoping it will get better, but this is as far as i go. Come on! At least have the decency to edit your work before posting! Tsk. Even you're Beta is confused over what is going on for goodness sake! dear lord...

Yay! Lemons! Sorry, I'm kind of perverted even though I'm only 12. I'm a strange little girl:)!