Just realized that I never reviewed this, even though I've read it several times, because Jesus -it's hot! I also like the analogy to Alice and the well known warnings issued to every girl since centuries - be careful your curiosity does not lead you astray, lest you might fall...

I wish you would add more. This is hot as hell and awesomely sexy. I would love to see Sarah sign up for forever in life. After all. Forever is not long at all.
~Jasmine Melody~

heheheh wonderful!

In spite of some grammar errors you have a very lovely style of writing that keeps me interested. Not to mention that very hot little scene you cooked up. Great job.

yummy...

I loved their short banter and their characterization was so them, especially Jareth. Alice in wonderland, Sarah in underground the comparison made me smile

More...

He makes social planning so awkward. "Have your goblin lead me to a dark place so we can f $k." Very classy.

Seriously, well written and good intensity. Love the concept of his teeth being his defining characteristic when she wakes.

Interesting. I found the last line curious, what exactly did you mean by it. I know there was supposed to be some deeper meaning, but I just couldn't quite grasp it. I love your Jareth, delicious. I like to keep hold of my runners was my favorite line. If I had one criticism it would be that I would have liked more sensory detail, specific smell, taste. Not metaphor necessarily, but you said feral smile twice, and used Other a lot. I would have liked to know what other means to you. Don't get me wrong this was a great fanfiction, far above satisfactory, but I think perhaps it could have been superb.

i don't ask for sequels but this loose end begs to be tied. so. sequel?

i think there should be a continuation of this story. i really liked it.

Actually really like this story. I would like to see this into a series if possible. Great job

I'm hooked! Great teaser! :)