Hey, I really enjoyed this story... keep ‘em coming... plus I like Chris Kelly...

As always I have enjoyed the story and the work. The storyline was really well planned and thought I do love your J/M solo love stories I found this to be feasible and quite tender. Very well played.
I love reading your work as it is grammatically correct, yet it flows with charming colloquial expressions.
I’m glad Chris was handled as she was. Made it sweeter and kinder.

I really enjoyed this story. It was a different twist but loved it. It was nice to see them go apart to get back together.

I loved this story. I’m so glad you didn’t kill Chris. I think she is a noble character. It didn’t bother me that it took so long to get to Rizzles. The cases were interesting and James journey seemed honest. I hope you are still writing somewhere.

Awesome!

I had a feeling that you were going to pair that police officer that thumped Jane up with one of the girls. I really hate stories like that. If you'd have marked you're story , , OC as most writers do then I would have avoided this story as it is thats 6 chapter I've wasted where I could have read something else.

GROSSSSSSSS

SO FUCKING GROSS I REALLY HATE THIS SHIT

FUCKING VOMIT SO FUCKING GROSSSSSSS

Transection of the right / left external caroted artery?

Chris is a very nice person, with her good sides and the not so good ones. You made her human and real, I like her...

yeah...those breast...siggggggghhhhh :O

For what it's worth so many years later, it was a great story. Thanks for writing it. Ignore the haters.

I have to say that I love it.

Good story