Reviews for New Beginnings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() you're last Update was 08-2-13 it is now 9/11/2013 please up date! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please add more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Another chapter. Poor Wyl, but great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::heaves a satisfied sigh:: More amazing stuff from you. I love you, did you know that? This story, on completion, will join the ranks of Chuck Norris in epic-ness. ;p Elliexx |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good reason to fear punishment. Abused children fear certain phrases and failure to please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() more chapters please! :) |
![]() ![]() I'd absolutely love to read more of this. I love how Kel was the one to save herself, not some damsel in distress. I also adore Wyl, he seems to have an incredible character if you consider the circumstances he grew up in. Please do continue! |
![]() ![]() is thise if not update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep up the good work! I'd really like to see more chapters for this story! It's refreshing to have a story with alittle darkness at the heart. There's so many places I could see this story going so I really hope you do develop it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. I can't wait to see how it progresses, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story keep going :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this isnt the end is it ? |