Okay, I wish I had popcorn. So many little pieces of this mystery are floating around but still to hazy for me to see how any of them might fit.

Samara doing her Justicar thing is bliss.

Morning. Is. The. Man.
Loved the entire scene with the vases. Really entertaining.

Things I liked:
Asura (she's interesting, has a life of her own and doesn't sound like a poorly thought out plot device).
Miranda (I don't think I've ever read about her in this period of time or at this point in her character arc).
Fedora is a convincing, very capable asshole with a life of her own and the existence of the first person on this list of things I liked is very intriguing to me.

So far this story has been trotting at a steady, easy to follow pace that is neither boring nor breakneck. I'm enjoying the pacing, very natural.
So now You add mystery to this whole thing and now I have another reason to care about your OC. I warmed up to her quick enough but I was wondering why the hell did she exist and now I do.

I cannot resist a mystery. I also delight in seeing how other writers expand on the lore, especially regarding asari.

I've read very few stories involving Samara in any sort of starring role so I'm onboard.

I am a sucker for asari and any and all exploration of mind melding which I think was woefully underutilized during all 3 games.

I swear despite myself and my reticence to reading stories with OCs, I blazed through this chapter.

I was on chapter 6 by the point I said, "You have to leave some reviews you insatiable reader or you'll burn in hell."

So, I've got to admit the summary of this story intrigued me. When you opened with an OC I was less inclined to read, I haven't had good experiences with OCs. To be clear, it's not that I wanted to keep reading, it's that I couldn't stop. I think it's a compliment though it started like the opposite.

Truly a great story. So much raw emotion could be felt. Thank you...this story will be one I do come back to read again.

THANK you

Shepard is kinda a hypocrite huh seeing as she manipulates jack but gets mad at Liara for supposedly doing it to her so weird. Doubt she's gonna get called on it though.

Samara is a monster.

No matter how many times I re-read this story, it's just as beautiful as it was the last time. Bravo!

Damn fine job.

Huh. There were hints of suicide but I totally didn't put it together. I really like what you've done with the character.

A fantastic story so far. Even the fights are pretty exciting. You should think of writing as a second career. :) Yay!