very romantic. :-) it's perfect!

This was really cute, I felt like the ending was wayyyy too rushed though

A darling fic written about Cloud and Sephiroth's relationship from a wonderfully different universe. Pygmalion was applied beautifully to this story, and I really have to appreciate the way you didn't just make Sephiroth fall in love with Cloud at first sight, ending it with a cliche note. I loved it. Thank you

Oh my goodness, Sephiroth. 'You aren't invited.' XD you know Angeal just wants to reply about how he wouldn't want to spend time with a meanie head like Sephiroth anyway! Haha, so cute. you really feel for poor Cloud and his (previously) unrequited adoration for the one thing in his messed up world that is truly perfect. I love it. Thank you for writing it. :)

OMG I almost cried while reading this story!

It's so wonderful!

I really love it!

You've done very very well

"The man was gleefully spreading butter on untoasted bread."

*shakes head chuckling* It's the little things.

God, so horribly sad! But beautiful in a soft sad tone that way.

Genesis cannot be held responsible for his actions. This is Sephiroth we're talking about.

Too much to say that I cannot form into words. Kudos.

Awwwww! SO cute! I was a little afraid to read this one, just because in the original pygmalion the story is reversed, and there is love, and then disdain, instead of disdain and then love. But this was very sweet, thanks for a good read :)

Much Loves,

Frosty

woot! ...i want to write a lot..but i just dont know what to type..it was just so amazingly wonderful to read...i think speechless! i mean i know it was a one shot but still! i loved everything about it..i wish it was longer though XD

gah, i can't believe i haven't read this wonderful fic earlier...however, i'm kind of glad that i waited until today to read it, because i'm having one of the worst day in my life and reading your fic kind of help to cheer me up... )

at first, i really feel like strangling seph for being so rude. just how can he be so mean towards sweet, little cloud? argh!

though, like cloud, i tried to reason that he was being like that because he was having difficulty to adjust to the new world...yep.

and i can't help but smile at the beautiful ending...with seph being his usual self but sweet around cloud )))

love angeal too, he's so nice, caring and protective of cloud, a perfect big brother character for someone like our dear cloudy...hehe

though it would be nice if zack is around in the story as cloud's best friend... D

I really, really liked this! It had an interesting concept that turned out beautifully.

Awww, this is becoming something of a habit! Prepare for the stomach mould, that was adorable 3

Adorable! I love it! Kinda sad it had to end, but so do all good things in life. Great job, it came out wonderful!

PipTheAlmighty

thank you!

was very beautiful!

Adorable. And a little bit of cheesiness never hurt anyone. I do love my greek myths and I love fics that incorporate myths, fairytales or what have you into the story. And I must say that I was really touched when Cloud brought out the photo albums and started talking about his mom. I almost cried a little bit.

Lilies, I have never wanted to kill Sephiroth so much in my life! How could he have been so mean to Cloud like that! UGH! I wanted to punch him.

ANYWAY the point.

Honestly, I thought it was great. It was a little more angsty than you normally go for and it was great! I'm SO SO SO SO glad you finished it and that I could help!

AMAZING.

Oh, and. Your review style. IT'S WEARING OFF ON ME.