Oh so sad and sweet. I love the brothers, and while sad Rin is very very sad, the interaction and love between them is so real. And you have Yukio perfectly.

Very very good oneshot. I really liked looking into Yukio's perspective. Good job on that.

*claps claps claps*
I liked so much this short ,pretty and spechless story.
I liked the only sentence that Yukio will be able to say to Rin: "I'm afraid of losing my brother"
Thanks for this fic :)

What a heartwarming story! You totally nailed the characters and the interactions between Rin and Yukio seemed very genuine. This is one of the best one shots I've ever read! Wonderful job dear! I was deeply touched. :')

...AWWWW! I really, really dislike Yukio, but the brotherliness is cute here. Poor Rin. Keep writing, this is amazing! :D

awwwwwww

Actually, the official English manga that I check out all the time from the library labels them as "Exwires" ...

However, the spelling "Esquires" is actually the correct version, so I'm glad that at least one fanfic got it right :D

but
but
WHY

NO TWINCEST

CREYS

Very nice. Pity that Yukio starts breaking down in later chapters. He has a lot of repressed envy and anger under that stoic, dutiful facade.

Oh, I love it. Yukio is spot-on, and Rin, even with so little to say, is too. Rin's question and Yukio's answer are the sort of thing I so wish we'd gotten in the canon storyline. And then, the ending lines just bring it home perfectly.

This is perfect! I love the idea and the writing, the characterization and everything! I have been looking in this fandom for the right piece and can never seem to find it, but when I stubbled upon this piece it was just awesome. Thank you! Keep writing!

-Lupelovell345 ;)

AWWWW, Cuddles!

This was so cute! Honestly I really find anime Yukio more interesting than Rin, but the manga doesn't make Yukio as interesting, and it's nice to have a reminder of why I like him so much.. .and Rin is such a freaking cuddle-bug!

awwww this is just so sweet! Love it!

very nice..I dunno if you've been following the anime, but after the trial there was not that much discussion between the brothers as I thought there might be...it was really nice to see a fic that explores their relationship more as it is in the series :)

I'm more of a Rin fan than a Yukio fan, but getting into Yukio's head like this made me like him a little bit more _

Great story! It captures the feelings of Yukio and Rin perfectly.