Well, that wasn't expected! You have a really interesting way of writing... in a good way! It was very poetic and dramatic... the way it climaxes and falls again... I liked it! It was very well done... good job!

It was very, very choppy, and jumbled, and for some reason that made it even prettier. It was strangely beautiful, and... well, wow. I loved the choppiness. I loved your details. I don't know what I didn't love in this fic. It was just, for lack of a stronger word, beautiful.

My heart is racing from the wonderful choppiness of this piece. So I will favorite it in order to read it again someday and get the same rush.