Cool chapter here like the ponies meeting megan , their reactionn to her , flutterhy examineing Megan by her teeth, Megan remember her spike and applejack and spike writing down twilight letter the line do you want to em write that last sentence down made me giggle

Excellent chapter nice introduction of Megan and her family and I like her meeting with twilight and rainbow both they reactions are priceless. I can see Megan being well trainned also nice refernce of the smooze

Cool and intresting start here love the way the build up megan myth in equestria I love the frilly twilight celestia momennt

This story was awesome on fimfic and it's awesome here.

I see a lord of the rings influence in this ending. Amazins story, it was really a joy to read it. I was expecting some sacrifices in the war but I guess that there was enough tears. Another point is what happen with the Queen of all ponies since her fate was a little ambiguos.

I was kinda expecting that you were going to end the story with:

'And without nobody noticing, in a place almost forgotten of the Canterlot's gardens a strange statue began to...'

This is the best MLP fanfic ever! I enjoyed reading it, over and over again. :D

I was surprised to see Wheeljack show up since he died in "Transformers: The Movie". I looked at your notes in FIMFiction and see he survived in your headcanon. Same for my TF headcanon, and also some of the Autobots that were killed off. :)

Mike helped people during Decepticon and Cobra attacks, huh? That makes him a Badass Bystander. He was probably still just a teenager then. :)

I have a hunch who this "psycho" is that Danielle mentioned. ;)

I guess you got my message mentioning Theodore Galloway. xD

I can't wait for any new stories you might come up with, and continue with "The Conversion Bureau: United We Stand"!

It was beautiful. You wrapped this up pretty nicely and I was glad how you ended it in the place where G1 all started in Megan's world. I was happy to have read this. I may not have read it when you started it, but I was happy to be here when you finished it. It was great reading this and I hope many MLP fans read it in the days to come and inspire them.

Excellent job and I hope to read another fanfic in the future. Til then. . .as a certain scientist in one of my favorite movies puts it. . 'I will see you in the future'. :)

that was a very beautiful

Awesome battle! :D

Some of us were correct on Rainbow Dash's ancestry. :) Anyone else?

I imagine Bulk Biceps enjoyed beating up the Shadowbolts. "YEEEAHH!"

I'm glad Megan, Danny, and Molly are able to say good-bye in person. _

Nice touch on the meta-reference with the names. ;)

Now that you're almost done, are you gonna continue with "The Conversion Bureau: United We Stand"?

cool story

THis was excellent! Very excellent! I am glad things worked great for Megan. I will enjoy reading the epilouge! :)

I can't wait to see how the battle between Megan & the Element Bearers and Tirek! :D

I predict the help Minerva is bringing will arrive AFTER Tirek has been defeated. Someone might complain that they've missed all the fun. xD

Wonderful job on this! Wonderful wonderful! :)

Cool Chapter great job Megen ,and everyone else ,now keep that bad guy from taking her again pls.:)

Great job