i mean they

i kinda wish that stayed as vampires but i still love it

Good fucking god...
I...
well...
Shit.

You're right about this being amateurish, but the plot? The emotion? Well made up for all of that. Dear god, I almost bawled my fucking eyes out at the end! Like, 'YOU MOTHERFUCKER, DRACO! WHY! OH GOD, LIVE HARRY, LIIIIIVE!'
In fact, I only accept Draco because of Harry's pain... and maybe because of pity... maybe... ahem, never mind that. Harry deserves every happiness he wants. There.

Ohhh, that angsty stuff hit me HARD man. God damn. I just may have to reread the ending, it being absolutely gorgeous. Shit. I'm a mess, and I have an assignment due in less than 30 minutes... Fucking worth it.

I can't believe Ron and Hermione would ask a drunk person to apparate home. Apparating is risky in the best of times!

Well at least everything turned out alright in the end.

It was interesting! I liked... No... Loved it!

Wow. This chapter was just... Wow. I'm not exactly an easy crier, but I had tears in my eyes at the end of this chapter. Poor Harry! You are a fantastic author, and I'm really excited for what's to come.

Okay, I just found this, and I remembered something from Goblet of Fire: isn't it illegal to kill/hunt vampires according to the Ministry?

Oh I love hate you for this one. With F-ing Aiden I was in tears and hating Draco Malfoy. I couldn't stop reading though. The way you write just grabs the readers attention and makes it impossible to put it down. Thank you so much for writing this!

I was all for reading this and I was enjoying it until Harry Topped. I will not read another Top Harry story, I hate reading them. Top Draco is what I only read.

OH NO! Poor Harry!

Poor Draco but also (No offense Dray) more so poor Harry the only guy he loves is hung up on AOTHER vampire who also happens to have been his mate AND is now dead AND the only reason that he agreed to be with Harry at first was to pretend he was someone else and NOW because of Vamp instincts

Why does Harry always get the short end of the stick? (

This is a horribly mean chapter you wrote and if I hadnt come to this story so late and I was stuck here without being able to continue Id probably hunt you down on principle 8p

This fanfic...Has emotionally ripped my heart out multimus times, stiched it together again, only to have it ripped out again... D:... Then turned right back around and Superglued the peices back in to its origanal shape... D: those are really the only words i have for this...

Woah...poor Harry :(
Great chapter! I like the way you make Harry so realistic and emotional :)