Brilliant!~

JIAHAHAHAHAHAHA! X'D OMFG this is priceless! XD Pfft HAHAHAHA! Oh this had me laughing for minutes. My cheeks hurt... Thanks for writing! Great description of Gyuuki and Karasu! That last scene was the cherry on top. XD

Haha! Looks like both Karasu Tengu and Gyuki have annoying heirs! Loved the part with Mezu and Gzou at the end! Although, I bet the Senba Garasu have their own complaints about their father! Could you write a story where the Senba Garasu complain about their father? And if you do, maybe add in something with mezu and Gozu like you did here!

This is really cute :) Good job

That was just funny and it had all of some of my favourite characters too [the Sanba - Garasu, Mezumaru and Gozumaru]. Please write more pieces about the Sanba - Garasu, Mezumaru, and Gozumaru. I can't stand not knowing what my favourite Gyuuki Clan heir and his second - in - command were planning to do with that disguise ... please write it sometime: I swear I'll read and review that story.

Nicely done!

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...I wonder what Gozu and Mezu were doing? O.o That sounds like it would be a really, really interesting fic all by itself! Poor Gyuuki, he definitely has it tougher than Karasu-Tengu when it comes to heirs. LOL! :P I really enjoyed this one-shot (mostly because I like Gyuuki), and I thank you for writing such a funny story! :) I hope you decide to write more fics for this fandom!

Awesome! I enjoyed reading!

i cracked up reading this XD

hehe funny

THIS IS JUST SIMPLE EPICNESS! that last line cracked my stoic shell XD well done, absolutely fantastic.

Well, I guess Karasu-Tengu and Gyuuki have more in common than the former thought.

Neat idea!

Oh my goodness! Poor Mezo! It's because you have such a pretty face! Darn, you almost bested Tsurara in cuteness! XD But I love the family woes! Poor dads! XD

~ LA

It was a great storie, I love the little Tengu, and the fics about their 3 childrens!