Reviews for Rearranging the Alphabet |
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FemaleLokiArcher chapter 1 . 7/6/2015 Another Namy fan! I love Namy! This is really cool. Keep writing! |
aceriane chapter 1 . 9/17/2012 I love it! It's very very creative and i love ned / Amy pairing! They are so much alike! This story is flawless and, like the others say original and realistic! |
GreenTinge chapter 1 . 7/22/2012 amazing story! just amazing, wonderful, beautiful, apparently love it! |
she cooed chapter 1 . 7/18/2012 Aww... that's so sweet! |
Stubborn Person chapter 1 . 3/31/2012 I don't really like the pair Amy/Ned, but when I read this, my mouth was like an O! It was beautifully written, :) good job! You just made a very stubborn Amian shipper that only like Amy and Ian to be together LOVE this story! You are a brilliant writer! :) From, A stubborn Amian shipper. :D P.S. NEVER BE SAD! :D |
Madeleine DeAngelo chapter 1 . 1/16/2012 Wow. I'm an Amy Ian fan . . . But /wow/! This story is beautiful! It makes that cheesy line (I'd put I and U together . . . )seem EVEN MORE cheesier! Good job! |
ttamagotchii chapter 1 . 12/10/2011 Aww :3 I don't know why, but I've always thought that Ned/Amy would make a cute couple. And this fic was really good. My favorite letter was "z" simply because of this: "It started and ended with you." You did a really amazing job! |
loudwhisperss chapter 1 . 11/17/2011 This was so...adorable :3 I think Ned/Amy would make a kinda cute couple now that I read this. And I love the idea of using the alphabet to start out with each idea. I loved it! My favorite had to be the z. Why? Well:"It started and ended with you". For some reason, that was my favorite line out of the whole story. Great job :) |
Flying beagles chapter 1 . 11/7/2011 Really like this fix even though I am an amian fan. Really creative! One thing though: is Zelda their daughter or just a random girl? Love it! ~ fb forever!~ |
RageRunsStill chapter 1 . 10/21/2011 Wow. This was really good! Very creative. :D A bit OOC at times, but nonetheless an amazing romance. I /would/ favorite, but I don't favorite authors and their stories. And I'm going to favorite you! :D I don't have any Grammar Nazi, unfortunately, because I read this story over an hour ago, and only now got around to reviewing. I do remember a few inconsistencies, however; not everything lines up with the books. But again, that set aside, this is one of the best Starling!fics out there, and I'm so happy I got the chance to read it. Keep writing! *~RRS~* |
Another Artist chapter 1 . 10/18/2011 I'm finally reviewing ~ I think everyone knows that I ship Ian/Amy (even if I mess with them in my stories), but I have to admit that I really liked this. From how they met to everything in between leading up to their marriage - it was all very nice. And realistic, like other reviewers have pointed out. I wasn't looking for any mistakes this time, because I'm time-restrained at the moment. I'm sorry for that, but from what I can tell, I don't see any. I really like this. I think maybe the letter could've been bolded, just to make them pop out a bit more...? Especially because some letters have a short story following them, while others only have a paragraph afterwards. But maybe that's just me. All in all, I was really pleased with this one. I was a bit hesitant at first, because I don't ship Ned/Amy, but I am really glad I tried this fic out. Good job, and congratulations on winning the Romance award over at the Madrigals! (You totally deserved to win over mine - yours was actually romantic. Mine was twisted.) |
ghettos chapter 1 . 9/27/2011 I already told you how adorable and beautiful this is T.T Great job, Cecily (: ~Drew |
Cascading Rainbows chapter 1 . 9/26/2011 OMGTHISISSOKEWWWWWWWWWWT. Ahem. All right. Pointers: -"He's is Neverland." It's in the F section. It should be "He's /in/ Neverland," I believe. -"Luckily, it wasn't too far." In the G section. I get why you're using the emphasis with the non-italics, but, really, no need. -Do you remember that old cheesy pick up line, "If I could rearrange the alphabet, I'd put "u" and "i" together?" The u and i are like 'this' not "this." This is because it's already enclosed in quotations. Praise: . It's so cute. :3 Love it love it love it. The whole idea. The execution. Everything single bit. Meh. This wasn't so helpful, was it? -_- But it was really well done. ~Joyce Review request fulfilled. :) |
pianoxgirl chapter 1 . 9/8/2011 Best. One-shot. Ever! I don't know why, but I have always seen Ned/Amy like a cute pairing. And your story helped a lot in that matter. My favorite letter was "z", I just adored it when Ned said this: "There isn't a Z. There shouldn't be, at least. It started and ended with you." Great job! |
MelRose520 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011 That was so sweet and creative! Great job! But did she marry him? What happened? I'm a bit confused at y. Anyways, loved it! :D |