Very great story. I hope u plan on updating

Maybe you should let someone adopt this story, I mean not to me because I would forget about it, but maybe to someone willing to continue this story could adopt it, because you got me hooked on to this, but you discontinued, and I wanna see what happens next man (or woman)! But anyway, this was a good fanfic, I'm not good at grading something like this, all I know is I like it and I want more, but I;m not telling you what to do, you can do anything with this story, its just a suggestion. I wish you all the best!

nothing pisses people off more then a author who gets to the good stuff and the quits

Lame

I can't believe you would end it like this. By the gods, every story I start to like that will have Naru/Kushi/sister. with him always get abandoned. It's so sad for me to see good stories just stoped. {:(

Have minoto BURN

Continuación x favor

Coupable car trop de preuve et même si 'pn coupable tout le monde pense le contraire et personne voudra de lui en tant que yondaime.

this sux

Love it hope someone continues it you are done with it the only thing that would make it better would be maybe a chap or 2 about his training and maybe a part about the twin pov

it starts to get interesting and you stop the story.

OMG this is exciting , and its great you mentioned Sara which is amazing. I cant wait for hte next chapter

Yeah, I think remembering your son should be worth a few sleepless hours.

Oh pls update I really want to know what happens next

Good story but at the very least finish the damn trial before stopping the story it's like the eternal cliffhanger "WTF HAPPENS TO MINATO DAMNIT" is what some readers are saying lol