I read all four chapters in a go, and I know you haven't updated in half a year, I'm still hoping and praying you do soon! I'm more of an Edward/Jasper fan, but I sure was not disappointed to read a story with Riley and Jasper being hot together. It totally sucks that they will be far away from each other, but its gonna be so worth when they see each other again! I love how you write, like really! All those football innuendos. Who knew football could be so effing hot. Wow!

So for bow I will keep waiting until you have the next chapter up, hopefully sooner rather than later(;

By the way I love that Jasper got sent to Dallas. Not because I'm a Cowboys fan, but it is my hometown and where I live! So woo!

Okay this story is awesome! I was hesitant cause I love me some Edward and Jasper action but it was all good! I can't wait to see what's next for these two. And I loved the fact that u were shouting out Indy and Colts stadium cause that's where I live...Anyway thanks for writing and hope RL let's you post soon! Being put on alert for this story so thanks! 333

I really like this story and can't wait for more...the poor boys so damn hot and now ice water...but knowing how devious they are love will find a way and I know u will make it good and hot and twisted (in plot and bed)...by the way I'm a Raiders fan all the way even tho my home team is the Lions...ty

hoooly fuckkk! you are one talented writer. lol you really know how to make reading this seem real.

i loved this chapter, as well as the whole concept of this story. :3 more please!

Loved this story. Amazing writing!

Amazing story. Great writing!

Wow I am loving these two. Their chemistry is electric, they are downright hot and I feel like I'm learning about NFL at the same time... And there is this undertone of angst that offsets it perfectly. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

just an awesome update

so hot, love these two boys

keep it coming!

how perfect that i finally got a chance to read this chapter while i'm watching the pro bowl! although i think it's fucking stupid that it's played before the superbowl now. anyway, loved, loved this chapter! not much better than some boy on boy lovin! but the boys are awesome at communicating and they need to keep that up to make their relationship work. i love that jasper made riley so comfortable with their positions and my heart dropped when their time together was up. but shit, you did an awesome job covering the draft. the tension is so incredibly thick and nerve wracking. i'm an incredibly laid back person but i think even i would crumble under all that pressure. or maybe not, i would do just about anything for 45 mil! wow, can you imagine?

Can't wait to see where they go from here!

Buffalo- poor bastard lol.

How are they going to see each other? *whines*

*scrolls to top and reads awesome fucking again and again*

thank dog you continued the original o/s. js

I sure hope they can work something out. Maybe they could hang out in the off season discreetly. I can't imagine they will ever be able to come out in the football world, would they? I don't follow football, but I reckon it is a manly game with not much tolerance. LOVE this story. Thanks for sharing.!

All the football watching I'd done this past weekend, it had me thinking of this fic, and yay, an update :-)

Still so far away again :-( Anxious to see how they handle being so far apart, especially after such a smokin' hot weekend. Feeling bad for these boys.

It is probably a good thing that they won't be too close to each other during the season...neither one of them would be able to run after spending the night together!

What an amazing chapter. There were so many great parts to it that I can't even narrow down what I wanted to mention.

Those last few lines killed me though. I hope you post again soon. I love these boys!